Sub-zero in danmachi

LV 13

ImBluey

Choji:......Strong Neji:........Very Strong Naruto:...Super Strong Madara:..Peak of Strength People who can read this ff and understand it despite its deadly grammar:..*Que One Punch OST*

LV 14

Fallout_Armageddon

I'll be blunt it's a solid idea with a good execution with everything other then the biggest part of any story grammar the grammar is so hard to understand that it takes a minute to decipher if you don't have you trusty rosetta stone to decipher these hieroglyphics then don't read that's a but of a hyperbole I'll be honest yes it's hard to read, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't continue it is good, and I'll continue because I've read worse, but yea

LV 5

In_destructible

FATALITY............................................................... ....................................................................

LV 13

ArtoriaPendragon_

Really interesting idea but executed terribly and so many cliche’s it’s not even funny If you just kept it being the mc as subzero then it Would be Cool but then you introduced scorpion which is stupid Also there’s the fact that he taught bell cryokinesis which can’t be taught The story is incredibly hard to read and overall just bad I Hope someone who Can actualy speak english and is good at grammer Could Write something similar like maybe a mortal kombat system? Where you can change to the different mortal kombat characters and have there skills,abilities and knowledge? Sounds like a dope idea i have never seen before Anyways overall this fanfic is trash and a waste of time

LV 5

Kaberial

My god it like read a machine translation of a novel. If my nose wasn't bleeding before I started reading this, I would've thought I might have an aneurysm trying to read the story.

LV 4

ProSpect

Ohh the grammar and the wording... its ruins this story... if only the author was better i could give this above 4.5 score. Edit: the grammar made me regret my scoring, so i lowered it even more

LV 4

DataMonarch

An amazing idea that was poorly planned and poorly executed. Not really worth a read... If you could even get through the first 2 chapters.

LV 14

yokedjaguar

read the first sentence. . . . .

LV 4

RaGnAr_SK

Scorpion appers out of nowhere.....really dude?....... so much potential wasted...............................................................

LV 14

Legacy_24

Grammar kills the story and it feels really rushed. no character development super short chapters its just not very good imo but the idea was solid

LV 3

nicehat

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LV 14

yokedjaguar

Their has only been 2 other ff/novels that made me turn away from reading it and giving it a chance before even reading the full first chapter you're the 3rd.

LV 15

Bearagamo

The story was very hard to follow and grammatical issues through it all the concept of the story is interesting seeming as sub zero is in danmachi however wen scorpion was introduced it threw it all off as well as teaching bell cryo abilities which should not be possible because that is a bloodline ability of Subzero

LV 12

gonzalo

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ZHODIAXK

Pls UP , , , , , , . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

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Midou_Givanci

I will give a 5 Star..... Cause I love your work🥰 .................................................................. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ..

LV 15

Evil_Turtle58

got to be honest not read much but it's a good read and I kind of love how subzero and scorpion are basically best frienemies kind of like baljeet and Buford from Phineas and Ferb

LV 13

I_am_inevitable

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 4

ItIswhatItIs

You cant exactly call it a sub-zero x danmachi fan-fic. But it is what it is. __________________________________________________________________