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What are dreams? The question we always ask ourselves. Can they come true like in the movies or fantasy? Can we have more than one girl or can we have superpowers that can make us cool or just all above? Dreams are something that can make you escape reality itself and create your own world but what if you have limits to your dreams. It Sounds crazy to believe in something that is imaginary.
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
I actually never read this kind of a story before. Very interesting Story development and the main idea of the book is awesome! There is a need to sharpen the writing spelling but overall it is totally worth a read!
Read the first two chapters. I liked the concept. It's not new but quite fresh. However you seem to have some problems with tense, but that's probably a wn limitation since we can't use italics yet. Anyway, this was good but I hope you can improve the writing quality a little. Best of luck.
A very interesting concept for a novel! Dreams are a graceful theme for realistic images. Sleep is associated with rest, peace, beauty, but is it only? In some situations, a dream is associated with a nightmare, anxiety, and even death... You skillfully used the 'theme' in your story. The plot is intriguing. Well done! Good luck with the contest!
The novel pulls you into deep thoughts and understanding, the narration is smooth and the writing is loving the characters were deep There weren't any mistakes to point out 5 stars for the author Good work
An amazing story about dreams and all the possibilities that come with it. Impressive work. An impressive story with two worlds to follow and facing our fears. Well written and amazing characters.
I really like the idea of the novel. It is a classic story telling about the mysteries inside our dreams. The only thing that I can point out to your novels are the grammatical errors, dialogues, and other copyrighted names of animes. It is okay to include them, but you do need to point that out at the end of the chapter (include the author). Overall, it is a fun read! [img=recommend]
Wow! It's great! Your writing style is praise-worthy and the way you described each scene is awesome too. I like it a lot! Keep up the good work!
Like the concept. I am a big dreamer and often have lucid dreams, so I researched on a topic a lot and like it a lot. I will keep an eye on this work! Good job! Keep it up!
Intelligent novel. If anyone wants to give it a try then you should you guys won't regret it . Good book. I will keep in library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long. Hehehehe.
I liked it :p
A unique idea! Being always interested in the concept of dreams and jumping between worlds, I may be a bit bias with this book. I loved it from the first paragraph. With a few grammar tweaks, this story will be a gem for its genre.
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
Overall the story is good, has very unique characters, and also has a very nice perspective, I hope they grow and develop... You describe well the fights and have very coherent dialogues, for sure you will go far with this story.
Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
Nightmares. I can see why you’d have the urgency. No one wants to be stuck there! Good idea and good writing with a unique bend on reward and punishment. I wish you the best!
I like the way you tell the story. Though maybe a bit cliche, it's well written. it's only three chapter for now, looking forward to read more as I've added it to my library. good job. Author.
OwO a philosophical novel that makes the reader think. This is new, especially on web novel. Trust me on this, it is NOT a mindless read. The mc has questions of life, the universe, and everything. He wants to find answers. Dreams will give him those. A nice book with a tint of well-done escapism. Not a bad thing here.