/ Fantasy / More Than What Meets the Eye
Synopsis
For the love for your life, are you willing to give up the love of your life?
When one has everything, one does not see what she is missing. Caress Aragon, epitome of beauty, abundant of wealth and pampered with love. In the brink of losing everything, she traded something she never realized the true value to her. Now, she must face the consequences of her choices including the ones she made in the past. Against fate, mystical beings and foes, will she still get a happy ending?
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"Why are you here? Get lost!" she yelled.
"Oh, should I? You always wanted me around." he replied, unperturbed.
Her whole face flushed red.
"So annoying! I'll go my way so bye."
She broke free from his grasp then strutted in hurry. Almost out of reach, she cheered herself. Unluckily... no. In a matter of seconds, she bounced back to his chest. All it took was an effortless pull of her arm.
"You're coming with me." he stated with finality.
Her eyes started to sting prompting her to lower her gaze before he noticed them teary. Earlier, she already accepted she was a lone fighter. Whether bruised or battered, she only had herself to soothe her wounds until he happened. It scares her so bad how tempted she is to depend on him.
She cannot help but inhale sharply as he enclosed her in his arms. He filled her with warmth thawing her make-believe invincibility. Thus, awakens the urge to whimper and just collapse on the floor.
"I felt your body shaking when I held you earlier and if I hadn't touched you, I'd never know. You're strong, independent and fearless, undoubtedly. However, we all need help sometimes and that includes you. Seeking help doesn't make you weak, Aragon."
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This is truly an intriguing read that will not stop you from reading until you reach the last chapter. Review Proper. Writing Quality. It's superb. The narratives are clear and the author has a great usage of words to tell the story. Stability of Updates. The author has a stable updater weekly around 3-4 chapters per week. Story Development. One of the things that keep a reader is surprising and interesting developments and this story has that. As I continue reading, it's truly engaging how everything flowing. From Care's death to the deal with the Fae and how she needed to find her soulmate and cut the red string of fate. Though, I've got the feeling who might be her soulmate 🧐 I'll just be quiet for now 🤫 since nothing is certain yet lol. Character Design. The characters are well thought out. I love stories with female lead the most and have a strong personality but at the same time kind too. Care has that (btw I love her name). For other characters, they are also good. Care's father is really gold. I also love how the author emphasizes the contrast between the character of Eli, a man that came from humble birth, and Care who is rich. World Background. Set in a modern timeline. And still, it's well detailed. Overall, this story is quite a refreshing read for a while. If you are looking for a refreshing read with a bit of time rewinding and other touches of fantasy. I greatly recommended this story to you. Great work author! Keep it up!
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Wonderful story. Only the first chapter is enough to feel the writing skills. Author have very unique style of writing. their writing is very clean and easy to understand. The cover picture of the book is also reflects the female lead. Very suitable. There is hardly any grammatical mistakes so the flow of reading is very smooth. I like how the FL is described and her character is explained. She knows exactly what she wants and lives in the present. I always love reading books with strong female lead. Updating stability is quite good. And story development is also not slow. The story is amazing and it is definitely a good one to get more attention. I hope all who sees this review give it one chance.🥰🥰
Into 17 chapters as of now. Loved the genre and tonal shift in the story. But I personally felt, you could have introduced the 'REWIND' plot point soon, felt the pace slower and confusing in the early chapters because of it. Really loved the main character and her dilemma because of her 'choice'. Will be continuing...
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I really like the story development so far. I think you can really got something going here! I have only read 9 chapters but I am going to add this to my library!
WOW! I am truly surprised with this story honestly. I was hoping for some cliche plot, but I receive more than that. I can feel the energy of the characters as I read them. But I'm hoping for more and more updates. I don't want to stop reading at the karma chapter. Keep up the great work author. Kudos to you!
I loved the narration of the author. It brought the story to life. The FL is also a very well- crafted character with depth and who invokes the intrigue of the readers. A great story with lots of potential. (Just a couple spelling mistakes, but it's nothing that can't be ignored)
Wow! I like the way you describe the scenario! The story has great potential, and if you work hard on it, it will be amazing work! Good luck!
I read the synopsis and it interest me, so i dived in... overall, its a good story, I rated all 5 except the writing quality, I do like how descriptive you are, a chapter is too short, it breaks my immersion and you combine sentences a little bit too much, its too long. anyhow, its a good read, I recommend it, Keep up the good work author. Kudos to you!
Five stars to the character(s) design, the story development, and the world background. The prologue is very intriguing, and the story surprised me in the turn it took soon after it started, but not before the characters were properly introduced and the world set. Special awards for the description of the character and the world. It was done in such a way that picturing the scenes was easy, and it was easy to become immersed in the story. There are about 3 turns that I liked in the first 18 chapters, but to not spoil you, I shall not talk of them. Should you read it? Read the first chapter and see if you like the style. I'd say that if you like fantasy, realistic characters, and world-building, you will surely like it.
The protagonist was likeable and has her emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!