The Star Child Games

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Mel_Aniv

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉

LV 3

Miss_Elated03

First off, I absolutely love your book cover it's really cool. I like your plot and it's concept. The character build-up is also very good. You're doing a good job, keep it up.

LV 4

Maryixxx

Wooow! I love the idea of the story, especially its Sci-fi. I love the character's development, the storyline is perfect. Job well done, Author.

LV 3

Dedz_

I like how the author executes the storyline as if you're on the water slide while you're reading this! So smooth! And that's because how the narratives are written so well that you will be directly sent inside the story itself. Yes, I mean it. As for the characters, I can tell the author put a lot of efforts into making them as realistic as they should. You can feel them as if they're beside you. What are you waiting for? Read this now!

All around a fantastic read, the imagery is amazing, and i found myself laughing throughout. The plot is entangling, and Keeps you coming back for more.

Exceptional writing, looking forward to the ongoing story and development of characters and settings. Will check back weekly for sure for updates.

LV 1

Easy_Tiger

Haha don't know where to begin with this one. A very fun read with a plot that is still developing at the point I stopped reading. Humor is the driving force in this one with some terrific banter and dialogue coming through with the zany character interactions. I especially enjoyed the prologue chapter with the FBI-like group of aliens meeting to discuss some concerning events. Very well-written with great flowing prose. This is one talented author with a very vivid imagination at play. I've added this to my library as I have to see where he goes with all this. Anybody thinking about reading this, give it a go! You're guaranteed to have many laugh out loud moments!

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Sailow_Sanchez

2 Votes from me I hope you win the contest. Overall the story is developing quite nicely. I like the flow and vibe. [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]

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David_Neilsen

I love this. Not much to say other than folks should give it a read. It is a fan take on the sci-fi tropes that make up the genre and well worth your time.

LV 14

Mineva

I love intriguing stories and the author has clearly put a LOT of thought into writing this novel. The most interesting thing about this is that the build-up to the tension actually asks more questions than answers and I am hungry for more. Cheers and I look forward to reading the next chapters!

LV 10

calfikydra

So i really like what i've read so far! I'm a huge fan of the whole ''agent/FBI'' vibe in the beginning, it really sets the scene. Since there's only five chapters so far, i haven't been able to fully get a sight - but what i've read so far, was really good! So it's a five star review from me <3

LV 14

evilantonio430

Hi, totally not a sock puppet of the author here. I have to say this story is really engrossing. You can tell he probably wrote like 11 pages of backstory before starting. I think we should give this story lots of power stones. after all, he probably needs the money to pay rent and puppy vet bills...