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Princess Pavitra Journey To The Throne

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Princess Pavitra, the youngest and most isolated of the King's five children. Her mother the Queen was murdered while she was a baby. Growing up although she showed incredible talent in awakening her magic, fire magic, she was still pushed to the side by concubines of the King, in favour of their own children. The Princess' older brother's. 

While this power struggle for the throne raged on. Her only friend throughout all of this was Shourya, he was the son of a baron, sent to the palace as a page to gain experience in the running of the court. Their friendship soon formed and quickly became a legend around the palace. The two soon found their relationship to be developing to be something purer and grander. They had even made plans to run away together! 

Yet fate has never been kind. Shourya was forced away by one of the concubines. Sent back to his father to help run the estate, or at least that's what she said. The young Princess was torn as her love was taken away and soon she found herself alone once more. 

Now she has been given a choice to gain the power and love she had lost. The fight for the throne has finally begun. 

Read on to find out if she will gain this power and find her love! Or will she fall and lose it all?

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    WinterTimeCrime

    A fantastic example of a writer using their own style and what they're proficient into their advantage. These are the types of books that're good examples of proper nominations for the WSA (especially after last year's fiasco.) Writing Quality: Excellent writing quality. The sentence structure is well-thought-out with transitions that have meaning, allowing the reader to feel invested in the story. A few unnecessary indents such as the POV transitions (as the reader we're able to determine who's talking and where) as well as some misspells but those can be fixed. Updating Stability: To early to say. However, my advice would be, if you already aren't, to stockpile chapters since you seem to be releasing +1 chapters on the day-to-day. Start making announcements saying you'll release 2 chapters next week if you get 10 powerstones as well as participating in TGIF for mass-releasing. You are working on two novels during WSA unfortunately, and with the 100k word eligibility, it's quite a stunt to pull. But looking at your current strides you seem to be doing fine. Story Development: The author has an intriguing way of describing a lot in between scenes. That could lead to me sometimes forgetting the premise of what's happening and focusing more on the writing than the story. This isn't a bad thing, just something to take into account as it'll be looked at as a "slow burner." Some readers might like this niche but if a book has the tags "Action" and "Fantasy" I prefer a bit of fast-pacing in specific scenes. Character Design: You're able to gain a sense of humanity from all the characters. Overconfident princes, Soft-spoken kings, and Prideful princesses allow the reader to form a connection with the characters. World Background: If I could give more stars I would. The imagery is magnificent. Each room or place being observed by the reader has detailed imagery to explain the surroundings but not too much to bore me from reading. In conclusion, amazing book and I'm glad to have the chance to compete against someone with your amazing talent. I've learned a lot from this book alone on what I need to work on imagery-wise to stay ahead of the competition. Good luck, Author-sama. I'll be watching <3

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    HerMajestyMystique

    Excellent novel! The way the characters have been portrayed, the way the plot is taking turn, it is just amazing. The way the whole thing is being expressed and being out out there is mind blowing. having fun reading it. Definitely should give it a read, it is worth every second<3

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    yu_chan_desu

    the first chapter isn't ur typical start with a boom but takes its time to set us up with who the FL is and what she can do, while also hinting on her sad and interestinf past.. i already love her and i look forward to her journey to the throne💖

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    Arkray_Villa

    W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h. Worth reading. 💕💕💕.

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    vinthakadha

    Well. A very good story. I looked at the title and started reading and finished reading all 43 of them. There a few things I would like to say about this book: 1. The story suddenly jumps from third person narration to first person narration which is confusing. So, I suggest that the author check for such errors before publishing. 2. some words are missing; thereby forcing us to pause to fill up those words. Perhaps a little more review could help solve this. 3. Spelling errors could be avoided with as I said a bit more review. 4. The writer is obviously more experienced in writing on this platform so she constantly keeps reminding her readers which I feel is a bit unnecessary. Maybe it is necessary; I do not know. 5. The story did make me feel like stop writing my current books and just spend the rest of my life just reading!

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    RukhsarQadir

    Very Beautifully written💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎

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    LuffyLucy

    INTERESTING NOVEL!!! I love Princess Pavita! I got hooked with her intro!! Not only is she the youngest mage but also a capital and commander of another regiment! She's a character that you can't help but love. Besides her strong side, you can also feel her humane side and explore more about her as the story progresses. I enjoyed the plot and the writing a lot.

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    Nekonigiri001

    I enjoyed the rollercoaster Pavrita is going through, showed that even a Princess has her human side. Im shocked with the plot twist, which is a great thing because I cant predict how the story would goes and it made it even interesting!! all the best author and may the spirity spirit guides you to success 😍

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    Gnaipafe

    It's a good read and a page turner. A must try I say and I really love princess pavitra's character and I can't wait to see more of her journey. She had noble purpose and it's not just revenge but love. She was discouraged but instead she chooses to be challenged.

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    LeeMaRi1999

    Definitely worth reading! The world building of this novel is perfect! I can't help but root for Princess Pavitra and her journey to showcase her magic to everyone!

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    techy_A
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    the story kept me hooked since start, the impact was good, well described and well written this book has the gold winning abilty, best of luck to the author and pavitra for their journey.

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    Jai_vardhan

    the story is well planned and plotted, the world background was easy to understand and characters were well established,. the story has a lot of potential

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    nishidurani

    the story is full of suspense, mystery and drama, i love the vibe of it. it make me want to know more and more. it is well written and plotted. good work author

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    Nah_U_Stupid

    What a great start 😌 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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