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A world where soulmates are determined by the symbols in their eyes...they would have special symbols in them that says they are soulmates. This way soulmates can easily find one another.
“Just because we’re soulmates, doesn’t mean I love you so stop trying to get along with me.”
“Don’t.touch.me!”
But who knew siblings could exchange soulmates with each other if they wanted to with a spell that they would only know...either for the worst or the best, who knows...
“I’ve lost...”
“We’re not soulmates anymore...?”
“What are you talking about? we were never soulmates...”
Their story begins there and on, what will happen to them will there be heartbreaks and tears along the way? Will there be rivals to make their little love story thorny and break? Find out more from this story as it all begins...
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WARNING : There may be some profanities in some chapters and further more, there may be mature contents in some chapters later on.
*Note* : The photo isn’t mine, I just changed the hair colour and eye colour so credits to the original artist of it!!
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This book is a sweet, innocent, unforgettable thing 💚✨ The progression of the story has the ring of a high school romance circled in marker around it. I really love it! My only advice is to pay attention to your grammar a little bit more for a better experience overall and to keep rising!
Overall - This is a very good novel to read. It is written from the first person point of view (multiple point of views). If you want to read a book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using first person narration style with multiple point of views. We are able to see the world through the character's eyes. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story linen is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
The story is really cute... I liked it. I hope you take notice of the lowercase letters when you begin a conversation and maybe break the dense paragraphs. Apart from all this, I think this story is a cute teen romance. Good luck, Author!
The story is captivating. It's cute and has a smooth pace which is a plus point. I like the way you write the scenarios. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
I really liked the story, by the way, I found it to be a cute budding love story. Author, I have very high hope for this story. looking for more ...
A great teen romance. The grammar is fine, world description is done pretty quickly which was enough. It the good girl bad guy kind of story. Clover seems sweet while I wanted to punch Zeke and her sister in first two-three chapters. Author you will need to give him a strong reason to hate Clover or it will be Christian Grey or Harrod all over again.
The story is really adorable~ especially the dialogue! It doesn't feel forced or cringey unlike any other novels! I was really hooked by the progression of the chapter! However, I do like to note about the switching of perspective. You could swtich perspectives to dig deeper through the characters, but try limiting it for a couple of chapters. It is advisable to focus at a single character until it's necessary to be inside another character for the next plotline. There are also a lot of lowercased letters that should be in capitlised form and missing commas. For an example : "Hey, Zeke!" and "You don't have to force yourself a smile, Clover." Adding these small things would ensure the smooth sailing experience of us readers reading your book~ Hope it helps!
This teenage novel is a cute one. The FL is a sweet charming girl with hidden fire in her personality while the ML starts with the cool uncaring demeanor that I anticipate will change along the course of the story. It's sweet, innocent and promising. Like the other reviewers said you can try fixing the typos if you can. Keep going, Lovely author. 👍😊
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far: Character: So far I do like the Character interaction and the chemistry between the main potential couple, Zeke and Clover they are quite and set up for their relationship is quite spot on. I also like the main couple have opposite personality with one another that makes it more intriguing to see especially Zeke cold demeanor and Clover charming personality, yet quirky too at the same time. As for the character there are all fine I guess, but I wanted to see more about their development especially the Clover's father character, so far he is just like an archetype or cliche of strict dad. I also love to see Zeke and Clover development too in the future especially with their romance that can make the story more beautiful to read. The writing is quite smooth for me and easy to follow, but I felt there is some flaws that I am really sorry to say this. Which is the most spot on is capitalization that is quite easy to fix in my opinion and it doesn't bother much. Overall, I think this novel can be a solid romance story with anime themes in webnovel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!
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I'll be honest, this is the cutes thing I've read yet! Your style moves my guts and veins almost making me fall in love with the male lead. The plot is captivating. The book cover on the other hand is an eye catcher. This story is promising. Keep writing cuz I just can't wait for more!!
I read this story till the end and I felt a roller-coaster of feelings running inside me, it a teenage love story and the plot is unique. I really really loved it. hope zeke will soon understand Clover feelings.
This is a very nice novel with a very solid plot. The novel is told from many different perspectives so it's very easy to understand each major character. There are multiple capitalization mistakes since majority of your sentences start with a common letter and a few punctuation errors for example, sometimes where you should have a question mark, you have a full stop. Overall, the novel has great potential. I personally really like the plot and the synopsis is a perfect 10/10 attention grabber. [img=recommend]
The plotline was great, and I like the tweek in the concept of soulmates. I'm not particularly hooked with the characterization, but it was still good but just not right up to my alley. It's easy to read, and there weren't many complicated parts, so it's comprehensible. The writing style was okay but a little confusing at times with the lack of details in the description. The story's development was kind of fast-paced but still smooth to catch on to. I also noted the typo, grammatical, and capitalization errors. It'll be best for it to be fixed. This is just for me, but I think it would be best to lessen the usage of emoticons or emojis and keep simple to the changing of point of view from characters. I hope the author won't regard this as an offensive review. It was a good read, and I wish the author good luck!
amazing work, amazing content, I love the description an how well written the chapters are. I can gladly recommend this novel to my friends. good work author keep it up❤️❤️❤️
such a dreamy, sweet, and lovely story. it had a very unique sitting. the way that soulmates select each other is very interesting. i like the part of switch the soulmate, and love triangle between the main characters. looking more chapters. i like it. i high recommended.
I'm a person the generally only reads romance here and there but this story has already already caught my attention. This story has a lot of potential and can only get better with more chapters. Add this to your collection for sure!
The story is really cute... I liked it. I wonder how the two teens will make it work! For the writing part, I hope you can make some space between paragraphs to make them less full!. Apart from all this, I think this story is a cute!!!.
Cute and fun story. interesting plot. And I like how the author describes the person's feelings even though it is 1st person POV. The story has smooth pace. Little bit grammatical mistakes but this much mistakes are ignorable. Over all, the story is great and i would recommend everyone to read it at least once.
Literally my only complaint is that there aren't more chapters! I was so sad when I got to the end. This story is so cute and fun! I love it! A few grammar things, as others here have mentioned, but it doesn't impact the reading experience much. If anything, the fantastic storyline and characters more than make up for it! Keep up the good work, author (:
Pardon me.. But I keep scrolling up and down to get the insight about who’s talking at the moment.. At first, I couldn’t find easily who am I? I mean, who’re you? How do we say that? I mean, when you use ‘I’ I keep being confused who’re you talking about.. It takes time to get to use with your writing style.. But it’s ok.. Overall, the story was cute.. just pay more attention to capitalize and punctuation.. can’t wait for more warm-hearted part[img=recommend]