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Free-Annihilation Day, also known as the "Gory Freedom", is an annual occurrence implemented by the Deci's "Supreme Legionnaires". Citizens, even non-jailed criminals, may kill anybody. They will not be given any charges or punishments.
Shin Masameru, who is blessed with one blithesome family member, had witnessed him get slaughtered right before the occasion ends.
Driven by his hatred and anger, Shin performed a Forbidden Rhythm, the technique that he was taught by his grandfather. It made him attained the Forbidden Clutch "Salutary Resurgence".
By using his ability, Shin will set out on an expedition, focusing on his planned mission while carrying an ulterior ambition.
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First of all, the start of the novel is good, it really gets me to continue reading it. It's descriptive and it's easy to understand. You can easily imagine what are happening in the story, also, the picking and use of words are incredible and unique. The characters are well designed, and the author did a really good job in making this novel. (I'm not fluent in english so bear with it lol😅) [img=update][img=coins]
I should say that there are several expositions. I think there's a reason why you wrote those(obviously). Anyway, there is already an enemy introduction. He's kinda OP, not gonna lie. To sum it all, the novel has a great start. A great start equals a great story. Keep up the good work and good luck.
First of all, your novel has an auxiliary chapter that contains information and keys about the novel, which was helpful to understand the novel. I can't put it into words, but I can say that the story's start is good. Keep this up and good luck on your writing journey. I feel sorry for Grandpa Makoto's loss, though.
It's a pretty nice read. Dialogues and grammar can use some but in how things are going right now I know it'll be good. More improvements to come!
The story is interesting, the characters are well-written, and the grammar is decent. The only reason this is a 4.2 instead of a 5 is because the plot line is practically a Purge clone. I haven't read beyond the first couple of chapters yet, so hopefully the story gets a bit more original!
This isn't my cup of tea. That said, I found the hook to okay. The background of the story is a mixture of a martial artist revenge story and a movie called "The Purge". I found this hard to read, which I'm chalking some of that up to not being interested in the horror that's happening in the first chapter. They're literally hiding for their lives. The dialogue was a bit rough, missing in the timing. The fighting starts taking place in the second chapter, which was too late in my opinion. I would've ended the first chapter with the cliffhanger of the attackers finding the grandfather. Then immediately use the fight to draw in the readers into the second chapter.
the start is really good, writing quality is top notch. the story is told really well, from the first chapter you already come to know about the world and the scene where grandpa tell that he dies to night, just love it.
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So, the has minimal grammar error amount. So far, to me it has been reading the "The Purge" series. It does differ, though it does feel the same. I hope that the author keeps writing so that we can see how the things will differ compared to earlier chapters.
this is actually awesome, ngl.. very well written and very well describe for the characters. tho, i do warn anyone who will read this review, i only read the first chapter and i can say that it is already good..i will def ask for more updates
Hello! I am "Seishi_". I'm the author of this novel, who will give a shameless review on my own novel. This novel is focusing on an 18-year-old teenage man, who was forced to perform a ritual and take its risk so that he can take revenge for the killer and his allies. He will go on an adventure around the world to find each of them. As the novel progresses, we can see the main character's development throughout the story. I'll try to be consistent as possible so that you will not drop and forget this novel of my own. I would like you to support this novel. I'll always be grateful for the things you will do to support me. Thank you and always have a nice day.