/ Book&Literature / Martial Peak (LONG AWAITED FANFIC)
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• SYNOPSIS: Being in the wrong place at the wrong time, a young man died unjustly. Fortunately, he was allowed to have a second chance in another universe with a couple of bonuses. Follow his story!
• Author's Note: English isn't my main language, but I still try my best. Anyway, this fan-fic can be considered a wish-fulfillment and will be a crossover with other Xianxia stories.
• The first and current universe/MAIN:Martial peak
• Planned Xianxia:
The Ultimate Scheming System,
Tales of Demons and Gods,
Against the Gods,
Rebirth of the Urban Immortal Cultivator.,etc!
• Release Schedule: 10 chapter/week,
tags: r-18 ; harem ; opmc ; system ;multiverse ; transmigration;
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Really was expecting something good but It is just A copy if the actual novel with slight alterations. Maybe add some new story without just copying the novel. Was really excited to read a fanfic about this novel but well brownies for trying.
finally ......................................... the curse of 1 chapter is broken here ................................................. please write more chapters and do not drop it most guys will support any novel after the 20 CH it is the lucky number for you
don't ever try to drop this ..................... ................................... ................................................... ......................................................................
Systems ruin a good xian xia novel, how can you go against the heavens if your soul is tied to a crutch? And not to mention those that have a store, an aberration to logic, few authors bother to explain how it works well, I love LN fanfiction, but I think that in webnovel the systems with a store are everywhere, nel The only system that I see acceptable here is that of The gamer. Anyway, a little vent, although I don't like it, luck with the story work, work hard and give a lot to the pencil maybe you can be the next Tolkien Pddt: Sorry for My English
that's how to fulfill my own wishes. but if you can't read a bad handwriting, give it up because the handwriting is worse than a child's... refresh rate pretty good. horrible story development. Even worse, character development looks like the harem is made of dolls. bottom of the world, it's not so bad because it's the bottom of martial peak itself
unfortunately i can't find a way to describe this awful jumbled up mess. I like wish fulfillments even tho they tend to be stupid most of the time, and i would've liked this...if i could read at least!
Please continue this and If possible u should release more chapter this will be popular fast 😋 🤩
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Dont you ever drop this fanfic Ive been wating for aomwthing like this for a long time but ever one who starts this fanfic ends up dropping it fir no reason so dont drop...............................
Bro from another mother pls don't drop Or add Paytm account name so we support 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍Good novel, nice story line
5 Stars for an actual Martial Peak fanfic, that novel has one of the most diverse cast and such a massive world that literally anything and everything can be done in it so it's nice to see it actually used for a change. Also Zhang Ruo Xi (Heavenly Punishment) is best girl, also most broken waifu in the xianxia multiverse by far.
where are you author when are you going to continue this fanfic even in reddit somebody recommend your work and this is the only martial peak fanfic that has good ratings and translation. the other fanfics are very slow or they drop it with just few chapters
update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please!1!!!1!!1
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I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I think this fanfic is good, and as far as development is no problem [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i will give you all of my stones just for choose this novel. XD i will read more and update here if i see no no things so future readers can atleast dont make their hopes high 💔😂
I'd honestly rate it lower, but usually people take the rating too seriously and evade the story completely when some could find it likeable. Writing has mistakes that breaks reading consistency. The story is generally boring I expected it proceeding at a reasonable rate but it just has too many jumps and random decisions. The characters honestly are one dimensional. The author has a goal for them and they conform to fit that goal. Personally it was too much surreal wish-fulfilment for me. Like MC meets the girl at the beginning, reveals several red flags and acts too dumb and the girl follows his instructions like it is only sensible to do so. After their first encounter she for some reason has a good feeling about him and the second time he meets her at her house right before she is about to be turned into a yin cauldron(which he acted out with his clone) with a way higher cultivation then she saw earlier and is able to get her to do it with him without finding anything suspicious with all that happened.
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GIVE ME IDEAS...........JUST THINK LIKE IT IS YOUR NOVEL.................MAKE YOUR FANTASY COME TRUE.............. I AM WAITING...........IF U DONT SUPPORT WHO WILL...............................