Looking for answers in the world of Dxd

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NighUwu

Okay this is great, I like the concept not many use settings like this. However, there is a fatal error because the author misplaced "he" and "she".

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8ightbit

This story would have been amazing, because the concept is cool and isn't like those braindead dxd fanfics where the MC self-inserts everywhere like one of those attention wh*res , but follows the exact same path as cannon, because the author can't get creative. This story had everything going for it, because it's fresh and creative, with the MC following his own path rather than cannon. Except.. The grammar is terrible, to the point where it is almost unreadable. He/she is all mixed up, there's random incomprehensible words popping up here and there. it's basically all a grand clusterf*ck, that gives one migraines because trying to decipher some of the stuff in this novel is impossible. It's like ww2 all over again with scientists trying to decode the enigma. All i can say is, Author, please use proof-reading. you can literally use it with Microsoft word or you know... google... and please.. He/his = Male/Man and She/her = Female/Women...

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TyrantTron335

Please Fix the words it's hurting my brain also the concept of story is good.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Huntsman

Honestly, the concept is interesting, but the sheer amount of effort I had to exert just to read past chapter one is mind-boggling. Even the so-called 'edited chapters' are the same. It's like reading a bunch of words mashed together, desperately trying to comprehend a single sentence.

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EreinSG

Why make such a cliché? The main character plays the active role of a good hero, knowing what kind of world he is going into, he was not embarrassed by the attitude of other races to people. But another enrages why he does it? There is simply no normal reason for playing the hero, initially the MC had to look for answers to the question about the meaning of life, and in the end he plays the role of a great savior

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Dao_of_Melancholy

Yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup yes yup yeah I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yup yes yes I yup I I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup

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FalgaGS

Story and concept will get you hooked. But the novel needs a proof read, its cancer . dmdmmdddd d dddkkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkkdkdkdk

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Karma_T3000

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Qifa01

its a good story interesting plot [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]but the writing could do some work

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LiYao

i really love the story because its unique and you will be hooked...... but its not good for my mind because of the bad grammar and those incoherent words that i dont understand. please look for someone that will edit it and revamp your work. because your making female characters into a he and male into a she. its really a headache combined with those words that suddenly appear that i dont understand. if it was edited and proof read then. i will give you a 5