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it's a good book good detail upon the story well a whole bunch of templates I just wish it keeps updating faster
First 20 chapters it ok to read but its get horrible upwards, some inconsistency, wrong grammars, and wrong lines of characters.. Its like the author didn't reseach about marvel and anime in the story...
I wanted to give this novel a try after years of seeing it around and I can't say anything about the new chapters, but I'm currently somewhere around chapter 50 and the there are so many simple mistakes or just weird sentence stucture mistakes that it makes it dofficult for me to no just drop it again, but I'm currently out of good novels so I'm giving it a shot in the hope that it will get better. The story is fine, the mc is someone I don't really like, but also not hate. He is fine just a bit boring. Some plotholes here and there and it sometimes lacks the feeling of distance and time. Also the dialog is not that well writen so you somtimes don't really know who is acctually talking and makes conversations feel chaotic and disjointed as if you missed a sentence from someone else or accidentily skipped it. Anyway I will continue to read it now and again and update if it gets better. (I really hope it does)
well it's good. the mc is little naive in early chapter but he got a improvement the went from little naive weak mc to planetary level hero who does help other planet it's good so far so thank you author
I'm a new reader to this novel but I can tell it is already great just from the first few chapters I'm definitely looking forward to reading it more
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I'm actually at chapter 140 and ... well it's not a bad story it even have good idea but the story is not complete like there are many time wher you don't understand what is happening, many times I had this question 'did I just skip a chapter ?' and the answer is no. I really don't understand where the story is going. There is also the typical problem where MC has too many power and the author forget about them making the reader asking if the mc is a retard. But if you stop your brain working, then you can enjoy it. (sorry for the grammar etc, english is not my native langage)
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i think i read it thrice and don't remember much . it was boring . MC is weak , too much fillers . author focuses on everything else except his system , his progress is very slow , I don't know what author is thinking . soon there will be fighting among gods and our MC just getting better at some tricks . i know captain America and Spiderman survive every battle but they are special . no other sane person could survive those figh being that weak . there ridiculously strong people out there. i didn't read much this Time ,i read it way before . . . . . everything aside i felt bored 😴. all his actions , his conversation didn't seems important
1st so many mistakes in grammar 2nd character development it’s a system, what do you expect 3rd blendering of marvel multiverse to keep up with MC’s power level Though I got a nice idea from this if any writers wants to write a ff The host of dedrag fought great rad to escape from the pursuit of all the supernatural and go to the other world But in the fight his soul got destroyed to save dedrag. Also Dedrag able to escape to the other world with a fragment of MC’s soul and reincarnated as a mutant with a alpha level but a bit creative type ability which compliments with his boosted gear. So he have dragon in him which give him many abilities and also boost his physical abilities On the other hand jean have phonex force which give her a boost in her mental abilities The synergy between them can be very good. A good plot for romance. Also MC will not be stupidly powerful and then became alone in later part. He can have the company of jean. So if any writer is interested on making a FF on this concept plz tell me as I can’t write a good ff.
The MC is so stupid you clearly have been showing you can do all types of magic in public and throwing iron monger around like a piece of trash and you don't think the government is watching you he doesn't deserve his powers or a second chance a life if he has all the info you really need but still acts like a naive little hero😮💨
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so.....yeah..... there's a lot of things wrong with this, the story, the power and skill ranking, charecter.......and the grammatical errors....oh my god...... read at your own risk
it's very fun to read the story and the story is also very interesting to read
I tried, but the grammar and in this story is atrocious, it's basically unreadable.
No lo entiendo, sinceramente no entiendo... Cómo este fanfic tiene tan baja reseña sinceramente es un muy buen fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Really hate that the MCs appearance changes into whatever character he's using. It may be a stupid thing but I can't get into the fic.........................
although I haven't read it all yet and I don't know how the novel develops but I saw in the state of the Auxiliary Volume that it has the midoriya template and I think that at that time the powers of the other wielders contained in OFA had not yet come to light so you could make it face a very strong opponent making it overcome its limits and unlock one or two powers, if you have already implemented something or you are just going to leave it as is it doesn't matter, this is just a suggestion
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Although the Update needs to be consistent or atleast a specific Schedule the rest is fine. Just don't drop it. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!! ....................................................................................................................................
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So I'm going throught the review see if the Mc have atleast 1 lover if there is one can someone add that #romance gonna come back and write real review after I have few chaps under my belt
Great book totally would recommend to read and all that😁😁!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................................................
Maybe my review means less but I had to power through to chapter 4 before giving up. I know I have high standards but this is just terrible
Hi, Moderator and Editor here, Just here to tell you all that this is a great book, our MC is in a great Marvel system with an immense story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update]
it's a good book good detail upon the story well a whole bunch of templates I just wish it keeps updating faster
First 20 chapters it ok to read but its get horrible upwards, some inconsistency, wrong grammars, and wrong lines of characters.. Its like the author didn't reseach about marvel and anime in the story...
I wanted to give this novel a try after years of seeing it around and I can't say anything about the new chapters, but I'm currently somewhere around chapter 50 and the there are so many simple mistakes or just weird sentence stucture mistakes that it makes it dofficult for me to no just drop it again, but I'm currently out of good novels so I'm giving it a shot in the hope that it will get better. The story is fine, the mc is someone I don't really like, but also not hate. He is fine just a bit boring. Some plotholes here and there and it sometimes lacks the feeling of distance and time. Also the dialog is not that well writen so you somtimes don't really know who is acctually talking and makes conversations feel chaotic and disjointed as if you missed a sentence from someone else or accidentily skipped it. Anyway I will continue to read it now and again and update if it gets better. (I really hope it does)
well it's good. the mc is little naive in early chapter but he got a improvement the went from little naive weak mc to planetary level hero who does help other planet it's good so far so thank you author
I'm a new reader to this novel but I can tell it is already great just from the first few chapters I'm definitely looking forward to reading it more
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Reveal Spoiler I'm actually at chapter 140 and ... well it's not a bad story it even have good idea but the story is not complete like there are many time wher you don't understand what is happening, many times I had this question 'did I just skip a chapter ?' and the answer is no. I really don't understand where the story is going. There is also the typical problem where MC has too many power and the author forget about them making the reader asking if the mc is a retard. But if you stop your brain working, then you can enjoy it. (sorry for the grammar etc, english is not my native langage)
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
i think i read it thrice and don't remember much . it was boring . MC is weak , too much fillers . author focuses on everything else except his system , his progress is very slow , I don't know what author is thinking . soon there will be fighting among gods and our MC just getting better at some tricks . i know captain America and Spiderman survive every battle but they are special . no other sane person could survive those figh being that weak . there ridiculously strong people out there. i didn't read much this Time ,i read it way before . . . . . everything aside i felt bored 😴. all his actions , his conversation didn't seems important
1st so many mistakes in grammar 2nd character development it’s a system, what do you expect 3rd blendering of marvel multiverse to keep up with MC’s power level Though I got a nice idea from this if any writers wants to write a ff The host of dedrag fought great rad to escape from the pursuit of all the supernatural and go to the other world But in the fight his soul got destroyed to save dedrag. Also Dedrag able to escape to the other world with a fragment of MC’s soul and reincarnated as a mutant with a alpha level but a bit creative type ability which compliments with his boosted gear. So he have dragon in him which give him many abilities and also boost his physical abilities On the other hand jean have phonex force which give her a boost in her mental abilities The synergy between them can be very good. A good plot for romance. Also MC will not be stupidly powerful and then became alone in later part. He can have the company of jean. So if any writer is interested on making a FF on this concept plz tell me as I can’t write a good ff.
The MC is so stupid you clearly have been showing you can do all types of magic in public and throwing iron monger around like a piece of trash and you don't think the government is watching you he doesn't deserve his powers or a second chance a life if he has all the info you really need but still acts like a naive little hero😮💨
Reveal Spoiler so.....yeah..... there's a lot of things wrong with this, the story, the power and skill ranking, charecter.......and the grammatical errors....oh my god...... read at your own risk
it's very fun to read the story and the story is also very interesting to read
I tried, but the grammar and in this story is atrocious, it's basically unreadable.
No lo entiendo, sinceramente no entiendo... Cómo este fanfic tiene tan baja reseña sinceramente es un muy buen fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Really hate that the MCs appearance changes into whatever character he's using. It may be a stupid thing but I can't get into the fic.........................
although I haven't read it all yet and I don't know how the novel develops but I saw in the state of the Auxiliary Volume that it has the midoriya template and I think that at that time the powers of the other wielders contained in OFA had not yet come to light so you could make it face a very strong opponent making it overcome its limits and unlock one or two powers, if you have already implemented something or you are just going to leave it as is it doesn't matter, this is just a suggestion
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Although the Update needs to be consistent or atleast a specific Schedule the rest is fine. Just don't drop it. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!! ....................................................................................................................................
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So I'm going throught the review see if the Mc have atleast 1 lover if there is one can someone add that #romance gonna come back and write real review after I have few chaps under my belt
Great book totally would recommend to read and all that😁😁!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................................................
Maybe my review means less but I had to power through to chapter 4 before giving up. I know I have high standards but this is just terrible
Hi, Moderator and Editor here, Just here to tell you all that this is a great book, our MC is in a great Marvel system with an immense story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update]