Gems of the Desert

LV 12

Milosic

I don't have much to say that can't be felt after reading the first 2 chapters. The author knows how to flesh the characters out from pretty simple happenings and interactions between characters which I find as a way to skip over unnecessary filler and jump right into the more intriguing parts of the worlds and its inner secrets and the such. Will be updating as i go further along the novel, would recommend reading.

LV 2

InDominus

For starters, grammar is actually good which is a win in my book. The first few chapters might be considered slow, but it passes as an introduction and the story only picks up from there. (I would know as I was allowed to read the prewrite). I may be a little biased but I promise you won’t regret giving this a read thanks to the world building that actually puts a picture in your head of what’s going on, and the personalitIes of the characters that actually make sense!

LV 10

Titaniumpig

Hi, Author here. I have tried to make a proper fantasy book, somewhat in the vein of modern epic fantasy like Brandon Sanderson and Patrick Rothfuss. I obviously am still a long way off from those authors but I would like to think I am getting better and better over time. If you want a book that is focused more on character and world building as well as a slow rise to action and adventure then I think you could really get something out of this. In addition, my grammar and English are both very nearly flawless, especially after several rounds of editing to catch small errors so if you are looking for a book that isn't chock full of grammatical errors, you may have found it.

LV 11

Alphapanda

The grammar is great, nothing to nitpick about there. The novel has a lot of blocks of text, though. Which makes sense given that the author originally wrote it as a proper fantasy novel in book format rather than webnovel format, if you can get past that little gripe, it should be a pretty great read.