Fate/ Dark Moon

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corvinus

we are close to 30,000 words, I never thought this story would go so far; but I'm having fun writing it, even though it's just that, a fun. Don't expect a narratively perfect story, why won't you find one on my profile

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corvinus

starting the second volume and moving towards the star rating without being all my comments. I'm so happy that people are enjoying. Let's go ahead with our story

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SR_2027

The whole plot and development is awesome. No Op and strong main character, he can be considered as very weak. I hope that author can continue to release more chapters. It has become one of my favourite Fate ff.

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Jmtxam

It's not a bad story, but I stopped reading when I realized that this was one of those authors who don't realize the difference between he/she....

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ChildishSin

It's well written enough and it has great grammar, but you should've put tragedy tag still. Since some people hate that and it is annoying to read bad endings.

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Ilovenovel

The story would be perfect If I could understand the story at first try. I have to read it atleast 4 times ........ ............... .... ...

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Neninho

The story itself is interesting, sadly the Writing is on the Machine translated level of Grammer. If you don't mind MTL, then it's definitely worth a read.

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alecss

God..................... this Chapter 22 was quite sad........................... ........................................................... ..........

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DaoistHKlxHE

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DaoistRanno

Good stuff albeit sad.

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Nur_Ahmad_Gifari_6487

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BAM_AMVS

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vish_Tepes

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Lord_Demon_3092

very good with the story already picking up on some emotional issues. I loved the first part and I'm enjoying the second,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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alecss

last chapters are giving a wonderful suspense -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------[img=update]

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Mercur212

Story is well written with all but there is one big problem same story is in Fanfiction under author named wallker so some notification would be appreciated. I mean author could have just two different pen names but it would nice to have some kind of explanation to it in synopsis.

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A_K_I_N_G83884929

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A_K_I_N_G83884929

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alecss

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