有眼不见泰山

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Four_Clover

I’ve been postponing it so I might as well write one. For the future readers that might read this, all I can say is that I don’t have good writing skills, and I despise cliche developments. At chapter 10, a lot of people dropped this story because of the direction this story took, and I quite don’t understand it. It was a sudden turn but a pretty logical one. I-re-read it countless times but the flow and logic seemed fine to me, so I can’t understand why people would hate it that much? So anyway, I want to write this as a warning for my future readers -First of, MC is a normal guy reincarnated with Gilgamesh’s face, naturally he will act it out sometimes but not go full cringe. -Characters have their owns brains so if the first chapters looked unrealistic, there will be an explanation in the future chapters. -If you dislike unexpected developments and would prefer predictable and MC always win type, then you don’t have to read this. -And lastly, everything in Webnovel is the same. Stories, characters and even developments. Only few authors could pull off a ‘Unique’ story. I might not be able to but I am trying. This isn’t some wishfulfillment fic, I am trying to write a ‘real’ story where the MC evolve in every interaction. He wont be perfect from the get go, his plans wouldn’t always succeed and not every woman would fall for his charms. So if you’re still fine with reading a story like that, then that’s alright with me.

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Writing quality: 4/5 Original idea. 😃 But MC stupid and story development stupid. MC says he's smart... 😔 and is stupid. The 5 elders have are n ° 2 of maximum power in the nobility, the world government. So, At the age of 3, MC orders the elders to build artificial islands. And to make the story more stupid, MC offends the elders because he acts as if he were the master, not forgetting that MC used conqueror haki in said meeting (at the age of 3 years ...) MC at age 5 can leave the holy land, travel the ocean ... worst of all, no one questions MC.That is, no one suspects that a baby (3 years old) can walk and talk like an adult. At 5 years old MC is not questioned for his adult behavior (stupid, but adult), there are fruits that do fantastic things, no one questions that MC's body has been supplanted by an adult ... 😔

LV 13

BreathOfSin

Dunno about others but I didn't like this fanfic, I've read first three chapters^ From there I deduced that Author has superiority complex as his Character thinks of Celestial dragon elders as his "Dogs" that'll do anything for him and he also thinks that "Modern day intelligence" is higher than Celestial dragon elders who rule the whole world... That's just plain dumb.

LV 14

DaoistyQNGiX

Waste of time. 10th chapter he is found out to not be from the One Piece world. What a complete waste of time reading ll dont bother with this fic unless you enjoy the characters of whichever world the mc is in and have them know the mc isnt from their world lol trash

LV 5

Truth_Only_Reader

I like how instead of him being the typical kind celestial dragon. He is actually a devil and I really like that. It is something new that I like, I liked how you added that everyone around him is treated like a mongrel. Plus the Gilgamesh vibe is amazing.

LV 15

Alekzi

5 Stars! If this story was inspired by mine, then I am honored! I am excited to see how different story you will make. I am waiting with anticipation and good luck in this hard journey of making readers pleased, because they complain... A LOT!

LV 5

Hero_MT

Nice story, go to save my Reading List. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 5

Ballad

An Incredible Fun Read it's not very serious and the idea is fun and original in a sense plus Gilgamesh Type MC is always fun MC doesn't care about Luffy or none of garbage he's just being a fun CD and using all the influence.

LV 3

Arsene_Lionheart

i like the story its original but there some illrealist "where mc is tortured and after he say it his fault ans have no gurege of it" and the turning développement were mc being controled and he say nothing plus he tall abouth "earth" this is really taboo, i am sorry to but if the mc is just the pet of imu and that go by, there is no point of it, i understand that the mc not always win and not every woman like the mc, but there is a limit of développement of plot, talking abouth is same as give the mystery and potenciel danger of 'outsider' to imu, just saying about the general of earth is taboo, so i hope you can make betterdéveloppement in the futur, of course this is just my opinion its not like impose it you can opposite your choice.

LV 3

JUST_S0ME_GUY

umu.. this mongrel shall offer you 5 gold stars. may the gods give thou prosperity and luck in your future endeavours. I shall accompany thou till the end of thou journey.

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ZeroAlpha

Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing keep it up

LV 4

H20_Fan

Amazing Work Just Ignore the Haters 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Gustavo_Cobos_1208

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LV 12

Immortal_Cat

Review should be more than 140 characters. But anyway, this is great. I hope it won't go on a a downfall after a while. 140 characters .

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victor_dupretz

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LV 3

Zserty_Serty

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Daoist571053

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LV 12

YouLikeBOOBS

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