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Huntsman

MC is annoying. Have so many cheats and so little limitations that there's a guaranteed lack of tension. Hmm, what else. The grammar isn't good, but it's not exactly bad per say. I really like the idea of Alastor, but the sheer OPness of the MC will certainly make it a bore to read. Development is nonsensical, a God giving him wishes with no limits? Why not make him a Dragon God already? It just doesn't make sense.

LV 4

ZYZ

it's just another dxd fanfic nothing special mc wishes super op powers go to dxd and then go to kouh town to play with some weak devils even when he is the strongest creature in their world and don't expect anything more than that the author himself said he has a shìtty imagination and this book will be dropped one day just another dxd ff nothing special at this point I really want to make my own ff but sadly I don't have alot of time I don't want to start a fanfic and drop it thats unfair to readers 2 stars for story 3 stars for effort

LV 14

Chayton0

Im honestly suprised, I didnt realize I could cringe this hard I gave myself a cramp in my foot from curling my toes so hard. This feels like a wish fufillment fanfic wrote by a 7th grader, but its not that bad just pretty cringe.

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YassineDSuLtAn

If there was a 0 star I will give it i don’t leave review in months period but decided I need to talk here[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 5

Demiurge_Ohara

Not only the 1st chap killed the story but the story itself sucks, plot holes, cringe, generic, and a wish fulfillment gone wring with predictable storyline . not to mention there's no characters or growth.

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J_G_Dodger

absolutely fantastic you should continue to make more thanks for the opportunity to read this work of art also I have to congratulate you for this so thanks

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Taylor_Lopez

amazing please make more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Midlander

[Reviewed up to Chap:17] I actually don't know the reason i like this, But... It did make me laugh a bunch of times. I do hope that we 'some' serious chapters from time to time.(Even if mc is OP)🙃

LV 3

He_he_he5000

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Daoistmaster

Merry Christmas to you all!!! The start of Christmas and I'm going back to post more chapters!!! (Expected Date: Dec 4 - 10) I hope you are all safe from the pandemic.

LV 1

TIFOEL

Может хватит историй с исполнением желаний... они как правило очень... плохи. Очень плохи! Очень вот вообще вообще! Система это всегда сломанное желание. И если кроме нее есть еще желания можно бросать читать! Если система единственное желание или золотой палец и у нее есть сознание. То тоже можно бросать читать. Если у системы есть магазин тоже можно смело не читать. Когда уже авторы прекратят пережевывать эти шаблоны???

LV 2

GaZe_Zero

This story is in general a good idea until a whole chapter is just multiple pages of powers copied and pasted from op anime characters that he wished for. He is so immensely strong that he is literally a God but is playing radio demon roll to annoy people. Grammar is ok but the type of writing changes at random making it hard to follow. In general this is a dxd story that try’s to fulfill a 7th graders wet dream.

LV 2

Tom_Reacher

I really like how the story is going and hope it doesn't get dropped. While the grammar isn't the greatest, the ff is readable. Plz don't drop

Masterpiece and also read my f/f Rising of the card hero also I wuld like to ask Author sama if I culd borow some of his Ideas because I wanted to continue my f/f trugh multiverse so I was going to put him as Alastor in DxD but than I found this f/f so I hawe to ask

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Error050

Very, very interesting. What awaits him further. It is very interesting to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Phase_MorningStar

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He_he_he5000

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LV 13

Luis121

I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE MOEE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE KORE MORE MORE MORE KORE MORE KORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

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HUNTER_X_23

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LV 4

Asura160

I love alastor's character and really like the setting of this story and at first it was really funny but the jokes are repeated alot and the dialogue of hazbin hotel is to much in this one and i hate the fighting there is no effort in the writing even if he is op you could do better