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The Over-Break System

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Author: ScotchTy

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After Suddenly Dying due to a Nuclear Strike in World World Three, our Main Characters, two brothers, find themselves standing before the two Deities whose Religious Artifacts they wore upon death.

The Two Deities give them a choice, enter the Cycle of reincarnation as usual, without their memories, or Reincarnate into a world of their choosing while keeping their Memories.

However, Option 2 carries a high cost; if they die…that’s the end of the line; they are wiped from existence.

This is a gripping tale of Battles, Bloodshed, and Mental trauma from their past lives told in a different style than typically seen in a Webnovel or Light Novel.

A tale where two brothers are set up against impossible odds in a world where they truly only have each other to rely on.

But… are their lives truly their own or have they become playthings and chess pieces in a grander, Divine plan.


((THIS STORY IS WRITTEN IN A VERY SPECIFIC WESTERN FORMAT, WHERE CERTAIN CHARACTERS WILL BE HIGHLIGHTED IN CERTAIN WAYS MORE THAN OTHERS! AT ITS CORE, THIS STORY DOES HAVE 2 MAIN CHARACTERS, EVEN IF EARLY ON, IT DOES NOT SEEM THAT WAY!))

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    PainlessNightmare

    I love the premise of this story, between the mixture of Norse mythology, and the relationship the two brothers have, this series is a great binge read for anyone looking to satiate their thirst for an action-packed series

    2yr
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    Turtle6969

    I just wanna start out by saying that this is my favorite book. The reasons for this are, 1. The writing quality is amazing with barely any mess ups or plot holes. 2. The way each character has their own personality and the way they interact with eachother is just amazing and for once actually human. 3. The struggles each character is facing with their own mental trauma and situations is so well planned out, even when the character is acting out of line or different there is a reason for it and it’s actually something that progresses the story in a meaningful way. 4. The book is something that is comedic and serious, and balances the line perfectly. 5. The main characters are people who mess up and who sometimes you don’t like or maybe you favor one way more than the others, but in many ways they are unique and different with their own ways to handle situations. And the final reason why this book is my favorite is that it never gets boring, yes sometimes there are things that you wish would pass quicker and yes the book is not perfect, but I believe that it is the very next best thing.

    1yr
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    Joe_jo_3480

    so far this book is great! interesting, unique, funny and quirky with chapters coming out daily. it's quite a refreshing read. cant wait to read what happens next! [img=recommend]

    2yr
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    Lazy_Chicken_God

    You haven't made any comment/review so I'm writing my questions here. 1. Romance/harem? 2. Are there constant shifts in pov between the two brothers. 3. Is there one Mc or do they share being a Mc.

    2yr
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    Shay_Oliver

    Writing quality = superb. Updates = YES! Story development = superb. Character design = superb. World background= I am already enjoying the setting so yes! This story will take you to the next level of Isekai. Thank you for this author-nim <3

    2yr
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    Gnaipafe

    I find most of the system stories confusing, provided that it isn't much my cup of tea. However, I found this one easier to get and understand, it is well written and interesting. So i got to give it a five.

    2yr
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    Kaira_Grey

    Intriguing start. I would highly recommend this book. Great story. Great characters. I like how I felt being in the scene while reading through the chapters. Great job author!

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    Hush_hush

    Nice novel. The synopsis alone had me wanting to read and know what happens to the MC from here on and out. And reading the initial chapters, it didn't disappoint. I'm so in love with this book now.

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    shrEk2o3

    A few chapters in and I'm hooked. I really love the brother tandem. The story line is awesome. Every chapter will leave you craving for more. On to Cynrik's adventure! Let's go ✊

    2yr
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    SighingClouds

    Well done! An interesting story. It's written well, and has many chapters already! Try it everyone! It's a good story! I'm sure you all will love it!

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    wounded_warrior

    Love the story! I haven't read that far in yet, but I'm liking it so far. Can't wait to read more. Good job to the author. I hope you keep updating and don't drop this.

    2yr
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    Not_your_angel

    Reading the initial chapters blew my mind. This is an awesome read. Thank you for this author. I can't wait to read more about the brothers' adventure. :>>

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    Antilliaantje

    at chapter 150 rn and i absolutely love it so far. 1 of my fav things about the novel is the sword forms the MC comes up with/performs. Just wish Gabby goes off of this Sakura guideline with all the whining she does but im sure it will change up later in the story

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    AsmodeusKOD

    I would’ve reviewed sooner but I couldn’ put it down long enough to do so until I caught up. If you love video games (especially rpgs) and anime this story is perfect for you. You develop a connection to the main characters the more you read about their interactions with each other and the world they live in. Gore to rival Re:Zero, camaraderie of Fairy Tail, action sequences that you can feel like you can see with your own eyes and a guaranteed laugh every other chapter minimum. 5 stars for sure.

    1yr
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    ChillCultivator

    I really liked this novel. Which is actually a shock to me. I read countless novels, mainly english. (Ok, enough with me talk). Overall, the writing quality is super good, with good moments added. My grammar itself isn't good. So I don't detect any major issues from it. The only thing I have issues about is the Story Development speed. Which, might be my fault as I have read too much novels. Character Design is eh, good but feels like something is lacking. (By lacking I mean, lacking something to turn it into a Top 1 novel). The Character Design is already good enough. The rest is full stars. Overall 4.6. If you read countless novels and find it slow-pacing, I suggest you try this. Even though it is also slow-pacing, the Story, Character Design, World Background will make it worthwhile. And before people criticise me about Character Design fault. I repeat, I am comparing it to having it becoming a Top-Tier First Rank novel. It is already much better than the novels surrounding it. I would give it a 4.5 if I could.

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    Nyxus_
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    1yr
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    DragonArchmage

    This has become one of my favourite novels, there is lots of banter between the characters giving you a lot of laughs, the background, story and twists keeping you always wanting more

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    Lord_Sogeking

    This is an amazing story, the characters are well written and funny, the action is solid and the dialogue is great, the worldbuilding is much much better than I was expecting, and I just keep getting more and more hooked on this. This story includes an adequate amount of details and explanations without making things confusing, and leaves other things unanswered/open for the readers to wonder what’s to come. This is one of the best fantasy novels I’ve ever read, and with the consistent chapter releases I have no complaints

    1yr
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    Colby_Shaver

    I love everything about this story, I personally think it is the best thing I’ve ever read and I can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen as the story goes on. However I know one thing for sure I’m gonna be torn when it comes to an end.

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    Mad_Sinner83

    luv this story it funny but Serious at the same time with a good power system must read hope the Arthur come back soon

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