Douluo Dalu: The Ascension of the God of Eternity

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Lazyboi

I gotta say this fic has truly blown my expectations due to the massive improvement in the grammar aspect. At the beginning, it was kind of hard to read but after a month or so of stockpilling the chaps, I'm astonished of good the vocab and grammar has become. Finding a good harem douluo fic is very hard and with a logical mc. Also the author truly knows how to satisfied his readers by including Xiao Wu in the harem because seriously that pairing is nearly impossible to find because almost every fanfic has her with Tang San. I can say this fic has great potential and I would like to see how far it can go. Also the author should really look into the update stability of this fic although I'm not talking about his mourning in the last few days, I'm talking about the overall updates speed.

LV 14

Demonzor

This story is just your basic overpowered capturing women like Pokémon story. There literally nothing good about not the writing the character or the interactions I’m starting to wonder if the author paid for the reviews

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KnightShade420

I love this fanfic so far and I hope the promise of an excellent fan-fiction gets fulfilled. I am amazed this was written by someone who is using a translator to convert from the authors native language to english.

LV 4

Arthur_ErosGod

This fanfic has so so much potential and I just cant wait how things gonna turn out. Get a somewhat simular vibe from Douluo: Stealing the Ten Thounsand Realms but with a more mature and of higher quality tune. So far so good. Please keep updating this!!! I believe if this rhymth is maintain, it will become one of the best Douluo fanfic, if not the best. The only fly in the oitment is the update frequency though. Its not too slow but its not enough for the insatiable me😞

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Void_Queen

This Douluo Dalu fanfiction has great potential. I look forward to the unfolding of the story and the release of the next chapters.[img=recommend]

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Mhmd_Omer

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ASURA2o20

please update more atleast 20/day I really appreciate this novel. my favourite is Haven chains & golden 🦁 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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DICKY_MAULANA

I like this fanfic. And I hope the update will be faster and the story will be more exciting in the future,,, I support your work, keep the spirit of the author..... hehehe

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Anime_Harry

I really like this story, the pace is not too slow yet not too fast so reader can enjoy everything at their own speed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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KumaKichi

Very good fanfic!!!👍🤩😍,,I didn't really expect it at first but when I continued it became more and more exciting, keep spirit and continue author!! 😘🥰

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DetachedDreamer

The translation isn't great, pretty bad actually. he calls the academies and Halls a "gym," that alone is enough to deduct points. Harems are cool but swiping 99% of the women is borderline creepy. im guessing he couldn't stand any other character getting a chick? lol other than that the powers seem cool but again he's an MC who wants to hide his abilities and all that nonsense. boring. overused. Overall it isn't terrible just some glaring flaws.

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Lazyboi

A promising Douluo Dalu story, even though it was google translated because the original language isn't english. The complain I have is that some words are put on repeat too much like "I thought", it's better to replace it with a similar word or maybe add something after it.

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Shurasik

I like the story ...........................................................................................................................

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Nico_Nico_Robin

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Diky_Maulana

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kite15663

theirs this fanfic that I forgot about a guy who fall in love with his rabbit when she gain a human body. its a Doulu Dalu fanfic I think, If you know the tittle can you please tell me along with its author

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Voidstar_

it's pretty good but where's the kurumi power he wish? I already read to the latest chap and still no mention of time/space manipulation,only chain of heaven(which is confusing cuz he didn't even wish for it). anyway still a great fanfic...