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On the night of the lunar eclipse in the year 2072, two identical twins were born to a pair of rich Mages, 2 little boys named Peter and Noah Magtris entered into the world of Magic and beasts...
Whilst Noah, the older of the two had an incomparable aptitude with Magic and had even awakened his mana core at the age of 5, his brother - Peter - was not so fortunate. Not only was he born blind but experts even stated he wouldn’t even be able to use mana ever in his life as his meridians were damaged.
This led to the 2 rich mages investing all of their resources into the once in a lifetime prodigy: Noah, leaving Peter with nothing.
Noah and Peter were inseparable, even though Peter’s parents always excluded him due to his unfortunate situation, his brother always treated him well.
However, things didn’t look good for the Magtris Family as at the age of 10, their prodigal son, Noah had suddenly fallen ill to an incurable disease and had died a couple of days later.
“Don’t worry brother, I’ll always be by your side…”
Those were Noah’s last words to his weak little brother, before he passed away...
Join Peter’s perilous journey in a world of cultivation and magic and watch as he overcomes countless dangers and hurdles. Is Peter really cursed by God? Or is his situation a blessing in disguise?
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This novel is for me, a 10/10. I swear it has too much potential. There is magic and technology. A protagonist with very good development. The world of this story has too much to tell. As a reader, I fully recommend this.
This novel has potential! And the author is improving drastically. I must say that the novel is decent and applaudable. The story is well crafted and the characters are behaving realistically. I am rooting for the Mc and can't wait for more journeys he will face [img=recommend]
Solid plot with a concept that is in no way too hard to internalize. The characters are not complete buffoons, either, which makes this both readable and entertaining. However, in order to avoid sugarcoating things I must mention that the dialogue could be improved. In the very beginning - not as much in the later chapters - the dialogue has a synthetic feel because the infodump comes through the characters and their speech. Overall a good read. Thank you for your hard work, author.
The start is amazing and sucks you right in, the writing style is great and the story is easy the follow. The first few chapters do an excellent job at displaying that there are larger things at hand than just what we are shown. The worldbuilding is another strong factor. This story is sent in a world that has both technology and magic, opening up a lot of possibilities in the future. All in all, this is a very enjoyable read and the story has a lot of ways it could branch out into different, interesting scenarios. If you are reading this review, you should give it a try at the very least.
Amazing! Very intense from the start. The world background is so intriguing and fascinating that you’re hooked from the get go. And the words come together to create such a beautiful tale. Amazing.
OP Main Character check Magic Cultivation check thats all i need to be honest. Loving the personality of our protagonist. Older brother seemed a little annoying to me but nothing over the top. Can't wait for more.
_______________ This is amazing! The story is very interesting and I liked it. It's a great book, so great work author! {A power stone for you!}
The story is over all great. Like how the flow goes as well. Isn't too fast paced either. Really like how things fall into place naturally. Keep it up.
Wow! It's been a long time since I read another novel with good writing, a story, world-building, and everything. It's a hidden gem. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
This review is done after reading the 9 available chapters. Writing Quality: It's not bad! The author is clearly experienced in writing. Story Development: It's not bad! The pacing was just nice. And the conflict is quite nice. It's actually great momentum building. Once this novel reaches chapter 15+, it'll certainly have good self-fulfillment moments. Character Design: The characters are nice. It was quite realistic. Although those thugs were quite unbridled and exaggerated, their roles were also good in the story's development. Updating Stability: If the author focused on it, it'll certainly be easy. He can update it. World Background: Quite interesting. A merged modern world and cultivation. Quite a thing to look forward too.
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Currently you're on a good track. Worldbuilding and characters so far have been quite fine. Since you already have some experience I'll get to the issues I found personally. 1. The evil stepmother seems extremely weird. We don't really have a motive for why she's making her children bully and torture the MC. Also, the father seems to be rather ignornant of the situation. He even smiled which is rather weird, unless he's part of the plot to torture his own son? 2. The old beggar that knows that value of the pill, and to never sell or give it away, simply gave it to the MC right after his daughter died. This felt extremely weird since he could've gotten rid of it beforehand for money and possibly saved his daughter? I think this part needs to be explained or elaborated more. Far too convenient and a bit unbelievable. 3. Currently the MC also seems too unreliable and uncapable. For me personally, it's not that bad, but remember webnovel readers kinda hate MCs that are too weak so you have to give him that boost soon or you're looking at a long play story with good execution to make up for it. Those are the current issues I found in the first 6 chapters. I can't find anywhere else to point out since the story is too new, but hope the pacing and action picks up soon.
OuO so it's mana cultivation eh Anyway, I like the start. The pace is fast and draws you in without much of an effort, the world background is still being set so no comments there. What I like the most about this body, however, is the WRITING QUALITY! oof! The writing quality is top tier and that compared with this quick-paced story, I think this will be an interesting read *Dabs in style*
I like the start of this novel, I hope author doesn't mess this up. /..................................................................................
Just started and the beginning seems dope, the mystery about the twin bro death is what I want to unravel hehehe [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I have read all the chapters and I must say this book has a promising future. I have read the Author’s previous outstanding work and this one definitely is much better. The idea of mixing modern aspects with Cultivation and magic is a very nice concept. Keep it up Author!
Truth to be told, this really a good book. The vivid description of the characters and story pacing is quite good. honestly, I can't fault this book.. The chapters is too few to tell how the future of the book would look like. But I'm sure, it promising.
Although not perfect, it still has rooms for development since it still has a low amount of chapters. Overall, it has potential, you should write more ^^
the book is rather stable. Good stuff if you ask me. I feel a sudden anticipation for more chapters. The quality is awesome. the transition of scenes is also great. I recommend you give the novel a read. It's worth it
Shameless author here! Hello! Hope you're having a good day reading my novel! As this is my second book, please do not hesitate to point out mistakes and flaws in the story and do throw in some stones, vote, send this to your library, send gifts, and everything in your power for this novel to improve a lot! Also, please try to comment, so that I'll know what your thoughts are guys! Do it on paragraph comments too! That way this novel will become interactive! I hope you give this novel a try and enjoy!