Lightning and Fire Given Form(DxD)

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_MICHAEL_SAINT

Man how many times are u gonna rewrite the same book i was at 40th chapter now I have to wait till it reaches 40 chapters, I am only giving iy a 5 stars cuz i know how the book is don't let my hopes down.

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BlackSwordman1234

This FF was the first one I ever wrote and I feel that I have really done it justice with the new rewrite..................................................

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trudny1

Review as of chapter 42. Rating: 4,6 This novel has very high potential. Author isn't relying on plot from the canon of DxD to drive the story. Now, why 4,6 instead of pure 5,0: Every chapter has at least 1 grammatical error, but it doesn't make it unreadable, you can easily infer the intent behind the writing. Example of those mistakes: incorrect usage of your and you're (at the bottom for author I will shortly describe which one to use where), incorrectly written word, or using an incorrect word (example: "you are very tough" vs "you are very though"). My other gripe would be that the romantic/emotional development of some female protagonists towards MC wasn't fully shown but just told that 'it happened' (Esdeath, Kuroka and Akeno). Overall the novel shows great promise with few issues that don't take away from the overall experience. We use "your" when we describe someone's possession - for example: your dog, your pokemon, your pen, your anger, your death energy. We use "you're" when we describe someone's state of being: you're angry, you're done for, you're victorious, you're dead. Hope this helps.

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LogiaFTW

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UnKnownEntity001

Meh not as good as his other fics imo. 10 chapters in and it’s still the “prologue”. That’s a prologue that’s over 10K words, a bit much. He’s still a child and it doesn’t seem to be changing any time soon. I personally have no interest in reading about child main characters. It’s fine for a bit to setup the story but for me it gets boring after awhile. Children and their behaviors just aren’t interesting to read about. Maybe I’ll try giving it a read some other time, but unlike his other fics where the mc is a child for a few chapters to setup the story this one seems to be going the route of the main story happens while the mc is a child.

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LordRinun

This fanfic is not bad but I have a huge problem with the interactions of the characters. The way they communicate with each other sounds so bland, like they don't have any emotions at all. It just feels a little bit mechanical, when they talk. I have only read up to the first 5 chapters, so I'm not entirely sure if this applies to the latest chapters. This is my first time making a review, I'm sorry if it sounds harsh. It's just not for me but keep going Author.

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FrogGodKing

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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Spabsta

Guess I’ll add to the reviews… Good story. Best story you will probably find about highschool dxd without a doubt. The mc is smart and doesn’t think with his pp Another plus side is that he doesn’t have hero syndrome!!! Far from it infact 😋 Cons: not releasing enough chapter 🤬

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MrfwuffymilkSan

Hello world my review time. I’m really liking the story more so than the last version grammer and spelling are good enough to ignore the mistakes, the romance is hehehe enjoyable his personality and background are enjoyable to me as well. Overall personally I enjoy it, no more rewrites please :(

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Lol_2050

Will the mc have his own concept? *spoiler Right now he kinda shares infinity with ophis, but that also means he can’t really overpower her without something new. If yes, I think something like Nothingness ( basically an even op‘er version of denial of nothingness from fate ) would fit the mc.

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Shurasik

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Episode_18

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Gaming_with_speedy

update update update update update update

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The_8th_king

Im loving this so far the idea of reincarnation is original and even the character interaction is natural and not too forced and even the interaction between the mc and herem isn’t so forced like other ff iv seen anyway author keep up the great work and dont drop this ff i think it has a lot of potential just stay consistent Im on chapter 16

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God_slayer09

was this dropped it would suck if it was it was a pretty good fanfic I hope it's just been a while since you've posted it's a really good read hope you continue

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Phantomplayer

I'll give a three. It's pretty good. A fanfic that actually tries to do something with all of the fancy background DxD has and not mindlessly following canon. If I had to give one flaw with this novel it would be that it feels a bit rushed. It feels like it's just moving from one battle to another with a few moments in between. It would be better if you slowed the pace down a bit to develop the MC's relationship with his harem. Other than that it's a pretty good fanfic.

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Voidstar_

why did you remove rossweisse and serafall but add shaltear and submission ? ............,..........................................

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breke_Henrique

I liked it a lot when I was graded it's over, 5 stars I really liked the personality of the MC, as for the grammar I don't care much since I read it with the google translation, I found the best DXD fan-fic I've ever read

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Daybreak_6987

Big fan of the first one but this one feels a lot better. I can always enjoy an author that doesn’t solely rely on cannon for a fanfiction.