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LV 4

Chainslock

Interesting premise with a promising plot. I’m a simple person—when I see the word “genie” I click, since I’m sucker for anything djinn-related. The writing quality of the author is good, with only minimal errors that isn’t distracting. Moreover, the pacing is good as well. Though I was expecting deserts and stuff, I still got hooked despite the western fantasy theme the book took a turn to. Overall a great read. Will be waiting for more chapters.

LV 1

Jolan_Hildebrandt

Okay, what you have is an excellent premise. What you need to do is slow it down. what you need to do is offer some suspense. Hook the reader in. You had the right idea at the start, but you didn't build up the reveal. Name the genie. help me connect with him better, how does he feel about his life? Give the genie internal conflict, and I promise you the story will shine.

LV 13

Ramirys

If the author keeps going, this will be an amazing novel in the future. I have never read something with a concept like this, it is very unique but also very well done. From what I read, there were no mistakes in the authors writing.

LV 15

Loctovia

This is a beautiful story. I can't even describe it. It just sucks you in with its uniqueness and simplicity. it is fun to read and i definitely recommend it. Good job author

LV 2

AMonarch

Interesting plot. I've always wondered what would happen if someone wished that a genie was freed and this novel does an amazing job detailing a story based on that plot. Only complaint I had was that there were a few errors in the writing in the first part of the first chapter but the quality improves later on so I am not disappointed.

LV 12

Pixiepiu

A solid plot. This story has the power to pull you in. I felt a strong emotion after reading the first chapter. Despite being a powerful creature, the genie was pathetic. Then with rebirth, it got a lot more intresting. The problem is jumping tense. However, you have some chapters you can edit now. Your story will be great in the future. good luck.