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Synopsis
Vol 1: Naruto World-Ongoing
Ren was born into the Hyuga branch clan with his memories sealed. A few years later, he discovers that he has access to NEN.
What are those sealed memories, and what kind of monster will he turn into now that he has access to both NEn and Chakra?
Learn about his adventures, how he gained access to NEN, and whether he will be able to survive till the end.
Tags : Neutral_Evil_MC || Villain || Reincarnation || Dark
Vol2 : One Piece World - Coming Next
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Updates: 1chp/week
I did this fanfiction just for enjoyment.
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Warnings:
1. Do not expect any regular release schedule from this story, at least for now.
2. If I get serious in the future, I will probably make a separate Patreon Account.
3. This story might get really dark, so for the people who dislike this kind of thing, this is your trigger warning.
4. I am new author, so don't expect romance for now.
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Reader Disclaimer:
Well... being a new author, I may do grammatical mistakes. If I do so, please criticize me and scold me.
I would appreciate it if you don’t leave a one star...not that I can stop you. I hope you stick through it.
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Disclaimer:
I do not own any of the characters except for the ones created by me for the fan-fiction.
The book cover does not belong to me neither do any Pic in FF so If the creator wants me to take it down, leave a message in the review area and I will do so.
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good idea poor execution ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I just cant understand what the frick the mc is saying It just seems like gibberish the sentences make no sense and his abilities are bery poorly explained
I'd give it a way higher score if it wasn't for one thing. The writing quality. More specifically, the constant mistakes. For example, random capital letters, missing words, extra words, etc. This all ruins the experience and makes the complex and actually fairly interesting story hard to enjoy, cause you have to decipher what the author meant, sometimes re-reading it multiple times. I don't like the mc at the start due to his extreme panic, but he gets better. I'd give it a 4,5 if it wasn't for the bad english. If the author tries to add romance, I'll probably give this a way lower score.
if you are undecided whether to read this or not just imagine Blackbeard from one piece regains his pastlife memories then he proceeds to kill all of the strawhats, whitebeard, take control of the marine and kill Garp then becoming so OP. yes MC is a character like blackbeard. well for my review: 1.writing quality-3 stars not bad but can be improve further at least better than some CMTL. 2. update stability-3 stars for now. i cant say much about update since author said he is not serious in writing of which he may drop anytime. 3.story development- quite ok wont give spoilers, but the inner dialogue can be very confusing as if assuming the readers will understand. I think because of poor sentence arrangement. I think maybe it is done on purpose to give a pure evil vibe of MC. Well personally i think its quite a genius of the author , this way there is no need to justify/explain any action of the MC. 4. Character design -only 1 star because theres not much inner struggle for character to mature only open the seal and have a fix world view and no room for growth (maybe debatable) need more chapters to know for sure. there is nothing much to say as for now maybe when we have more chapters. 5. world background - 4 stars because author successfully captured one of the naruto verse vibe. On like how dark the ninja world can be. luckily there is no xianxia dialogue style during family feud hahaxD
There are many spelling errors that make this work somewhat hard to enjoy while reading ....................................................
Ummm~its seems like Author-san sure has read ‘ Naruto- the great swordsman ' from Navyking. I guess. ( I didn't remember the name clearly ) well, it's only a few chapters, there isn't much development, but surely in the future and I hope you will execute it properly. writing quality is ok(good) for me as my native isn't English, so I didn't need a God-level grammar. And best of luck, I will wait for more chapters to come. sorry brother, for not giving a 5 star as the story has still a long way to go.
I saw your post on discord and thought the story is goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood will you continue to post??
It is indeed pretty well written anyways kudos to the author and i hope he can give us more chapters as soon as possible ..keep up the good work my friend !!!
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As a Author, I have right to give myself 5 stars, so Y not Also I would appreciate If you don't give 1 star. ------------------------------------------------------------ Update timing will remain unstable cause, I have JOB and I am writing this FF just for FUn. And NO I won't Drop this Until I kill MADARA so Don't worry I will also appreciate If you Dont judge till you finish hmm 9 Chapter's. I mean It takes few initial chapter to Develop Rhythm and Plot. -------------------------------------------------------------- I promise you won't be disappointed reading this cause I myself have read many Naruto fic and got bored so I get You Naruto FF readers. I spend lot of time thinking about arsenal abilities AND NO they ARE Not Copied from Other FF's. Thank You for all those who read and appreciate my work.