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'What goes around comes around.
You reap what you sow.
As the call so does the echo.'
All of this simply means that your actions dictate your consequences, but do they?
Different cultures and different beliefs but most of them have one thing in common, they believe in a higher power.
Now, imagine a world that seems like ours but only has a couple of more elements to it, yes the world of mana and magic.
Do you think humans will still hold onto their beliefs when they can become gods themselves?
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A world where dragons and griffons are more than just a myth, a world where even the dead aren't safe, a society with little to no empathy, and our protagonists are blind.
An empire on the verge of civil war, risky plots with unfathomable consequences, this book contains all
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Yes, this novel contains multiple points of view, which might confuse you at the start but it will make much more sense when the novel goes on.
There will be a tinge of romance but it will be quite slow, it is more of an action mystery than a romance novel.
At last, place this in your library if you decide to read it, criticisms and reviews are welcome
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Okay so hear me out, This novel is very intense, there is not a single dull moment in it, the author's writing improves after ever chapter, the amount of foreshadowing done in the initial seven chapters is mind-blowing. If you are looking for a novel, which has a mysterious touch to it, I recommend reading this.
Ok. So u see. Don't hate me for this.. 1 : Have u ever dabbled in writing different povs. Bcoz to me i don't think u have any experience in writing different povs in a same chapter. In short, it's confusing. I mean I was having a hard time thinking about who is talking about whom. 2 : The quotation marks are misplaced. But that happens with every writer so you should be careful about not doing such mistakes. 3 : Proper spacing between words is sometimes missing. It's like this "I am not going" see? how much space is there after "I" It's not a blunder but it still hardens the reading experience. 4 : I would suggest. Read as many novels you can. Traditional novels, WebNovels, lite novels, everything. Harry Potter, Sherlock Holmes, Slime Datta Ken.. they all can help.. 5 : And yes I am not a great writer myself. I have no right to correct someone else as I am not that Godly. But I said all this as a reader. 6 : You can still improve. 7 : I would have suggested you to write another novel with a one and simple pov as to gain some experience in povs but I don't think you will stop this novel as soon as you started it. So, u just need to step up your game. 8 : Your goal should not be becoming a no.1 author in WebNovel you should aim far more higher. Don't you want to write a story that is being published on a hard copy. Don't you want to become a best selling author? Don't you want to attend fan meets? Don't you want to see your books selling off the charts? Doesn't your heart beats while imagining all these? Or you are happy just being a frog in a small pond? Aim higher. Become strong. Write a world that was never seen. Demolish the competition. Everyone will know your name like this. You can do it. It's a good start for you. Keep going. Never give Up. Thankyou.
One of the rare novels I've read here. The characters are very well designed. Author associates the reader with these characters and puts them in different moods all the time. At first, the constantly changing POVs can tire the reader, but as it progresses, this situation starts to get better. You need to read at least the first 8 chapters to understand what I'm saying. One of those novels that will only get better as time goes on. I'm waiting New updates 👍
While I am interested in knowing what's going on, which makes one want to read more, I find myself wishing for more. More description or anything that may be relevant, more insight into what's personally going on with the characters as they navigate life after their connected experience; just a bit more to each perspective. I feel like it may also help with making the world feel more fleshed out. There are eleven perspectives thus far, four of which seem to be for main characters. While I personally don't think changing the perspective often is necessarily a negative, it does need to be done well to work. The flow of the story seems fine. You can follow what's going on despite the shifting. However, expanding the amount in each perspective would help a lot in my opinion. Increasing the immersion in each section would help make things less jarring when it does shift and leave the reader with less of a sense of whiplash from hopping around so much. Aside from that, there are quite a few typos and grammatical errors, but those can always be corrected with some editing. I marked some for you c: Overall, I think it's an interesting concept that should be further refined. This could easily be a diamond in the rough. It just needs some polishing ~ I would be glad to reevaluate my review in the future
This is my first time writing a review, I don't really like to write one but this book forced me Author, pls don't change the POV jumps, it's very unique, your work is like that of Sanderson( although the writing quality is not half as good) What I mean by the above statement is that we can't skim through things, The first couple of chaps were quite good, but the next four had a lot of action and less dialogue After 7 the characters had a spark of life within them, I read the comment in chapter 11 that you are doing this for fun so please don't change your writing style because of the other reviews
I am extremely confused at times, and the pov jumping is kinda goofy. The writing quality is good. World building is great, a lot of different types of magic smooshed together in 1 story. I want to see how you deal with it. Dragons are also cool. The story has potential and so far is good.
Honestly way too much pov jumping, it's hard to keep up with and follow. The world building is decent, but other than that it is a little hard to keep up with the characters, There is a lot of story and dialogue, but there is almost no character development in the scenes, it needs a lot of work
The plot story is great. It made me confused sometimes because I don't know much about magic and magic people but it was intriguing me many times. At chapter 6 in the beginning I was confused about who is talking but reading it again I figured out . You made the bad people have some harsh time behind them and instead of hating them for making so much bad deeds I somehow finished by feeling bad for them . For example Samantha and Nicolas... they were using the magical creatures and hurt them but when Nicolas got killed I felt sorry for him, Same with Samantha , when she sow Nicolas dieing I felt sorry for her. All in one , you made your story catch life from the first word till the last . keep it up . Congratulations.
The writing quality is good, it only needs more time for editing. I saw some typos and a few errors here and there, but besides that, I could imagine the scenes vividly with how you describe it. Also, in a first POV, I suggest removing the words, "I thought" and that stuff because we are already inside the character's head in a first POV. The story development is nice, it explains the scenes/what the characters are currently doing with little to no excess words. Character design is good as well. Although I got confused, I was able to understand the character's personalities. The world background is somewhat fuzzy but it gave a clear explanation about the rules of magic in their world, so good job on that. Lastly, try to edit as much as you can before publishing a chapter. Remember, quality is better than quantity (for me). That's all and good luck!
Hi, I am the author of this wonderful novel :D It's really difficult to write a review about your own novel, but I will try and list out the key points. This book contains multiple points of view which may feel a little complicated at the start but It will help in the character development of the side characters in the long run. There is no interface or isekaid character in this novel which will make explaining everything a lot more difficult, so bear with it till the end of the first arc.