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Synopsis
Empires fell and rose with a slight gesture of his hands. Whenever his sword undressed from scabbard, it pierced through space and time.
Arvad was a prodigy, who had learned theoretical magic by the age of ten. However, the results of Awakening Ceremony declared him a trash with no affinity for mana. He was exiled from the throne he was meant to rule. When everything was falling apart, a system's chirp echoed.
[Magic Engineer System Activated]
[Quest:- Survive in the demonic beast forest for three days]
[Reward:- Depends on the evaluation of your performance]
Then...
He bombed the Capital of Lucas Kingdom, invented RPG missiles and brought down gigantic aircrafts. The only one to ever set foot upon the Magic Academy with no affinity for magic.
Witness how he fought, fell, and rose again. The Exiled Mage, everyone called him. But they knew him as the most Notorious Mage in the entire Siara Continent.
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It is a legend of a Pseudo-magician, a thief, a masterful magic engineer, a lover, a dragon-slayer, and...
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The early chapters are dedicated to world building and character building. So, please be patient with me.
The cover does not belong to me. Kindly ping if you want to get it removed.
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The clumsy poems ahead are my original works.
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Enjoy your time here.
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Wow! I will definitely guarantee that Novel will become legendary if developed properly. From my years of experience, I have to say that this is the second time that I've praised any Novel and talked so highly of it. This Novel have almost infinite potential and possibilities for development. The premise just kicks you into the turmoil of Chaos that this Novel represents and sucks you in the story development. The story development of this Novel is the unique point that send shivers down my spine. In so many years, this Novel is the first one with such a strong premise that I've ever seen. I would have further gone into the topics in this Novel but because of the low amount of chapters, I will have to stop here. But seriously, if I had to describe this Novel, then I will say: PERFECTION WITH UNLIMITED POTENTIAL AND INFINITE POSSIBILITY!
Only the prologue is out so far, when it updates more I'll update this, but so far it's a good start. The prologue definitely creates a lot of intrigue with a lot of information being handed to us without much context. I can see that there is a world behind this prologue and it makes me wish there was more to read so I could start discovering more about it. The webnovel is well written and the writing ability of the author does not seem low.
the novel's idea is new and original, I like it very much, keep going, I'm looking forward for the next chapters !! what I noticed most was the flawless grammar and incredible writing style, at one point I felt totally lost inside the world you created! nice overall ✨
Sounds interesting A lot of characters have been introduced A song of darkness?!?!?!?! ................................................................
Loving the story so far. The concept is very fresh, and it is not like your average system novels. The concept is unique and fresh, so give it a try. You might regret if you don't.
The quality of writing is absolutely top tier. Rarely will you find something this literarily beautiful on the site. The world is immense and immersive. Clearly lots of work and effort have gone into the details to make it feel as alive as possible. The characters are mysterious, but they all serve straightforward purposes to progress the plot. Give it a read! You won't just enjoy it. You will probably also improve your English skills here.
Idea of novel seems to be a newly forged one, and there does not seems to be a single grammar mistake. Just read prologue and chapter one world building seem to be going in an Epic Direction. Umbras and King and even that Emperror well best of luck author, hope you can keep writing this Author has firm grip of the language. oh yes one final this. PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS
Wow…i gotta say, i was expecting way less before starting the story, but that was overturned really quick. The writing quality seems really high and professionally done. Hmm, the story started in a weird place and juncture, but even though they are in court and stuff, a lot of world building seemed noticable, and the end of the envoy was also quite unexpected. Just the epilogue alone seems a little too long, i recommend writing bite sized chapters from 800-1500 words, considering that when people see too much text they get lazy to start reading. But overall i like the story, going to wait for updates!!
I would say this is a good start for a series with alot of potential. Slow start but that slow start helps develop the world in an interesting way. I would argue that this story is well suited to people familiar with the system style format as you can see very early on common concepts of the genre. Overall an interesting world with plenty of potential to be enjoyable by those familiar with system style stories.
This dark fantasy gave me the chills. I like reading Gore with properly chosen words and this book has that. The raw dialogues of the characters were very realistic. This is a perfect novel for fantasy readers. Great job Author
The writing superb and excellent. The pacing is perfect The story is great and makes me want more each chapter.[img=recommend] ............
The story is great and author's way of describing it is also amazing .It keeps me engaged to it throughout I am hoping to read more chapters and the story ahead.
I enjoyed the read, the detail was very good, and diction was good. I can't wait to see where this goes and what's to come of the Umbras or the house of aeron. 😊 good job
The story quality looked more like a traditional novel than a web novel and can be quite confusing at times, try to make it easy to understand by dividing the para's. and besides writing quality the plot is interesting but i can't judge it right now since there are only 1 chaps. ill rewrite my review later after your story has 10 or 20 chaps. keep up the good work
The story is avery ambitious, and I commend the author for such a premise. Looking forward to more chapters, and will post a detailed review later
Though theres 14 chapters its a bit slow. But I still do really enjoy it! I love the characters already aswell! Can't wait to keep on reading and see the journey.
The writing quality is superb! Good idea on having your story start in action. The only thing that somewhat irks me is there's too much description. Don't get me wrong, you have done well in describing the characters, and their looks. It definitely has potential. Look out for purple prose though since I did see it often as I read your work. Besides that, good job! It was kind of fun! Good luck!
Hello everyone, Author here. So, I am writing this review to answer doubts some people might be feeling. Like how's the synopsis and story even looks related? Where's the System? Magic Academy? Let me tell you this novel is slow paced in the early chapters. It will follow the training phase of MC along with the introduction of System. I can't say much since I don't want to give any spoiler, but I promise it will blow your mind. As I have been saying, this isn't going to be your average System/Reincarnation novel. The concept is very fresh, and I want the main character to take time and fully mature. This book will make you fall in love with the world. Hope you won't give up on this book. Thanks for giving it a try. I won't disappoint you all. If anyone has any doubts or criticism, please feel free to reply on this comment, I will answer every single comment.