The Golden Prince

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Melshan

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The_Ram_TS

No está mal, pero, el protagonista comienza a perder protagonismo. Esto no estaría mal en una película o una novela de un profesional, pero esto es un fanfiction y mientras más complejo algo que debería ser sencillo, más tedioso se vuelve intentar leerlo.

LV 10

Benoit_Valtin

I am going to leave the novel for the reasons cited in the previous chapter. moreover I prefer heroes, and here we have a guy who is much too passive, that will certainly change, but it's not pleasant to see from a high point (in the other novel taste or reincarnation in general, in chapters 20 the mc is at least a teenager and has his plans already in place.) there at ch31 the only concrete thing that the mc is doing with this future information is to burn the parchment of reagar's prophecy, and even then it was of no use . thank you for all the author, really I will give a good rating of 3 anyway.

LV 11

Abaddon1

It is a great self insert Targaryen story. It is great that the author is going for a different route of becoming the hand of the king instead of going with the same ascending throne plot.

LV 5

Dieudonner_17

Writing quality 4 stars: Little little mistakes and punctuation errors here and there(would have given 5 stars but sorry I have ocd) Updating stability: I dropped this story once because I thought it was dropped😅😅😅sorry if there were real life problems but it receives 3 stars Story Development 3 stars: What’s going on I know(saw it from authors thoughts) that you’re confident with what you’re doing but personally I’m not seeing anything. Plot is as meh as it is to me. Only reason it’s three and not two or one is because it maintains that semblance of medieval life(no offense) and that author is not afraid to change the plot(far better than ones where they rehash canon but are weirdly proud of it thinking they’re writing masterpieces😅😅😅) no offense. Character development 1 star: Excuse me in advance I’m going to be harsh with this. Scrap off your mc. I don’t know what you were thinking to make a reincarnated person blush to kids and stammer when interacting with someone like oberyn whereas he’s smooth to giants like olenna Stick to one(personally you shouldn’t have made him reincarnated, would have made things better and more understanding) Mcs training and all that excess things I see are cos 90(no effect). In fact it’s trash(that’s how bad the character development is). Only redeemed by the fact that writing quality world background and story development can pique one’s interest. Otherwise, bleh. World development 4 stars: Author doesn’t seem scared of adding his own tidbits to the planetos setting(wonderful).

LV 13

Salsaman

Great start not sloppy in execution and the writing itself is pretty concise Excited to see where you take it //////////////////////////////

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Melanie_Pelaez_1435

I love the self insert Targaryen stories where the si has to fix the dynasty before it’s to late. I hope it regular updates and doesn’ t just stop there.

LV 3

Liubelu

What can I say? I’ve just finished the volume 1 and can’t wait for you to update this story again! The grammmar progresses as you read the story. The golden prince Daemon is a very interesting character which I very much like, as many SI tend to be overly kind and have a hero complex on this platform. I recommend you all to give it a try!

LV 4

LordOfSandDunes

This ff is unique and well written. The pacing is nice too. I don’t know what to expect exactly as all the houses are becoming intertwined together. I don’t know how the war will occur and the suspense is good. Anyway, I would recommend reading it it’s good. The character is confusing at times but that’s to be expected as his brother turned on him and he’s angry( could be the Targaryen blood).

LV 13

DaoistHUUyXZ

can you make cersei be a romantic interest in this story

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Darkiling

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AgustinaGM18

Me encanta como se va desarrollando de apoco la historia!! Ojala Deamon pueda salvar de todo lo malo que sufre Raella en el futuro! Saludos……………

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nevershe

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LV 4

Dragonsnow

It is being very good at the moment, although it has been a short time, it continues yes very godddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

LV 5

Azen

The story started great but it became lackluster in recent chapters and it turned me off to continue reading. The problem is the MC, he has the mind of an adult but the way his thinking is regressing and starting puberty all over again and becoming paranoid just like his oldest brother about prophecy. I don't know what the author's planning is but the story is getting meh 😑.

LV 13

Tyler_Karp

Great story! Please keep updating more and don’t drop. I’d like to read this story till it’s very end. The premise so far is amazing. I always love game of thrones stories especially one where the mc is levelheaded. Keep up the good work.

LV 4

Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee