Potterverse: A Wizrard's Tale

LV 10

_Solomon_

I loved the book so far ,i hope the mc joins Hufflepuff cz they have the most population and Hufflepuffs have weaker talent compared with the other houses generally so the mc can use his talent and personality to charm others and gain his first batch of followers like Tom did during his time at Hogwarts.... I'd like to see a dark lord from the muggle side who revolutionizes the wizarding world... this is just my opinion cz Grindelwald wouldn't win even if Dumbledore wasn't there bcz the majority of the wizarding population come from muggle background so joining Grindelwald means betraying your origin and voldemort is just a psycho who can't compare with Grindelwald so even he wouldn't succeed if there was no saviour but the mc who comes from muggle origin can gain the largest support through muggle born wizards and vampires, werewolves, centaurs who shall be mistreated by umbridge ltr on... overall point of view the magical world cannot stand the tossing of a muggle born dark lord who wants to create a better world for them

LV 13

WaltzWannaWrite

Although only 4 chapters when I am writing the review, I can say that this FF deserves 5 stars. Writing quality, Update stability, Development, etc. are quite good. There's no problem in these areas. I will see about World Background as Author publishes more chapters. What I am slightly disappointed about is that the interaction between the MC and his parents. It is clear that the time before Hogwarts is pretty fast faced, just summary of how he is preparing for the future. And I am not against it. On top of that, once Hogwarts arc starts, we will get to even less interaction between his parents and him. So, what you can do is, in between the summary you are giving to us, you can include small flashbacks to show how exactly the interaction between his parents and him goes. Like, you said that his father propsed his mother at Tower Bridge. And how they decided the names of their children based on this event. So, you could have introduced a flashback of that interaction. Like, the 3 of them were sitting on the couch in front of the fireplace in one winter and in-between some minor talks, MC asked his father how he propsed to his mother. Like this, a picture of he spends time with his family appears in our minds along with showing the characters of him and his parents. And this isn't my desire to read some fluffs speaking, Author. Absolutely not. Anyway, good luck and I hope you dump 100 Chapters tomorrow. Just kidding. Hahahaha...

LV 4

arno00

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