THE SET UP

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Adeyanju_Faith

A very interesting stories I know the unknown story is yet to be reveal. I can't wait to see more of this. Keep it up authoress. I have read about your other stories too my evidence and hunted house they are really an amazing stories to read.

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Little_North_Star

Nice book, love the synopis, the tittle, im a fan of historical romance so im definitely go to read it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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wookie0_

I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters

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DaoistNotAvilable

The plot-line is pretty interesting, and the story build-up is good. the teen romance aspects in the first two chapters is cute. but it does become a little confusing and tiring trying to separate the conversations from the rest of the story. do go back and re-edit your already uploaded chapters. this will make it easier for the readers to appreciate your story more. :)

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Marianne_2020

this is just great, it is fun and lovely, and with an amazing storyline author, I'm hitched by the story development and character design I really can't wait for the continuation.

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Gu_Ye_Rouyi

I love the story, it has a good start, I love the characters it's ten over ten I highly recommend 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

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aleksandra_pano10

The story itself is good it gives me vibes of adolescent problems at first chapters but after reading the synopsis im even more excited for the story. I think it'll be a very good thriller/ mistery story [img=recommend]

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Roth_Raven

This is really a good novel 😃 From the start it was already interesting and also enjoyable[img=update][img=update][img=update] Please do write more 😁😁

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Kittylovely

Interesting novel, it's a good read but i'd like to point out a few flaws in it if you don't mind. First of all- You might want to edit your synopsis. Make it shorter, explain only the main things and not just everything, the rest is up to the reader to read and find out. Second- Try placing quotation marks in your conversation and indicate who is saying what. e.g "Why are you holding my bag?" Tina asked in surprise; Something like that. Third- Try to fix the structure of your sentence overall I hope you're not offended, am just pointing the things that if fixed would attract more readers. But do keep it up, your novel is interesting and fascinating and the fact that I've always had a thing for high school novels makes me more attracted to it. Added to my library~

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DonDenis

I've read a few chapters into the book and it doesn't disappoint. The plot's straight forward and the grammatical construct of the story is just okay. A solid read. keep it up author!

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LittleBastard879

The story and also the character design is very good, but please use "" to specify the word spoken by the characters. It would make easier to read

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maylily_jk

The story is so interesting and captivating. I read first few chapters and I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Great work author 👍

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_Rockbison_

Nice and fresh story l must say.... Loved the character tina and kunle... Also how kunle is in love at first sight kinda things... Its really satisfying... But one thing l must say is.... It is really confusing to read the dialogues as it is not seperate from the other expressions or the sentences..... You should have use apostophy ( " ) to seperate the dialogues.... Other than that everything is nice and interesting... Keep going...

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GenXPrays

You are an author who does not miss details. And she knows how to put them in writing... THE START-UP, is a very adolescent writing, with those emotional variants, with vivid dialogues and youthful reflections. With family care, from children to parents. From teachers to students. Between friends... and why not advance between lovers...