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In Nine Serenities there is a popular saying that "Nothing Is Impossible". In a small county in the Soaring Cloud Dynasty, Meng Hao is considered a trash who can not cultivate, but is he really a trash? Join Meng Hao in his Journey of Conquest to the top of the Dao.
everything in the story is purely fiction.
This is my first story and English is not my first Language, suggest will also be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
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Well... what I want to comment is that your paragraphs are too long yet the chapters are too short. For the first one, I suggest that you try to break the long paragraphs, especially the dialogue ones and I'm not sure if I'm guessing this right but it seems like you wrote the chapters from your phone(?)
Hello, the premise is interesting but the paragraphs are too long making it hard for me to read. Like Rin said, I suggest you shorten the paragraphs
I am here first yay! Hello hello author, read until the chap 5... Love this author. Even if you said this your first one, I was so attached to this. gonna add to my library and wait for you to upload more bcus I am gonna finish reading all the chaps soon. Waiting for more. Keep going. You will get more reviews and support in the future from other friendly authors and readers. I am so sure, this will be a good piece.❤❤❤❤❤❤
Author Here, This is my first book, Please I would like you guys to have a look at the story, criticism is allowed and Suggest way to improve on the story. Thanks.