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Bell delves himself into the unknown with nothing but his trusty old dagger. Finding out that the dungeon was not all pink and fluffy that Dungeon Oratoria depicted it to be.
With being inches away from death, the youth finds himself come in contact with a remnant of the past. A soul from the Era before God's.
Deciding to guide the lost lamb, Orario will find itself in the middle of a storm of the great danger that lurked for millenia.
What will happen to all those who are fearless?
Will fortune be able to to fall upon the brave?
Or will death reap away their souls due to foolishness...
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First two chapters are for those who didn't read or watch the Danmachi anime, or novel. You can start from Chapter 2.
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I'm making this review after reading the first four chapters, and I can say that the story holds a lot of potencial. Being able to see a different Bell, not clouded by the shadow of Ais opens the doors to new things and different perspectives over scenarios that may or may not happen like in the novel. Can't wait to read more and see how it develops.
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It has a lot of potential. The author introduced some AU elements, which is a breath of fresh air. The way the author writes the characters is really good, and he/she has this unique skill of making me feel emotions with his writing. (There's only 10 chapters when this is written so I already consider it good if it manages to make me want more).
Seems pretty good so far. The grammar is also better than 95% of other fanfics on this app. There are still some errors but it's very good nonetheless. Interesting plot, Bell will be more mature and not as naive due to Argo being there, something I really like in Danmachi fanfics if done correctly. Bell having the soul of a Hero from the age of Heroes acompany him is something unique that I haven't seen in any Danmachi fanfic yet. Adding more AU stuff that isn't in the LN/Manga gives it a breath of fresh air making it better than those generic stories that follow the Plot to a tee with just a few original things sprinkeled in. Keep writing and take your time developing your ideas. As much as i'd like to say: "More chapters" it wouldn't do the story any good because it would then feel rushed, plot holes will appear, grammar will get worse(If you don't have an editor that is) and you're more likely to get a writers block(What you can do is make them a bit longer. That should make it more satisfying to read in my opinion.). Keep in mind that if you are consistent with your uploads your story will get popular more quickly. Welp I hope I could help a bit. Good luck and have fun writing this.
My opinion will definitely be different from others, but from what I've seen so far...this is by far one of THE best dammachi fics I've read on this site so far. Even if it has 7 chapters so far. The world background is a bit slow, not overly so, but that is understandable since the story has only just begun. However, that could also mean the story won't end up short, which is definitely a plus in my book. (4.3/5 stars.) Updating stability is pretty solid. A decent 4-5 chapters is released per week, from what I've seen so far, and imo that's pretty neat. (4.5/5 stars.) Character Design. Now this is by far one of my favourites in this fanfic. The characters so far, Bell, Hestia, Freya - and the spirit, feel so fleshed out. Their reasons, and actions for the way they've been acting is delved deeper on. It is mostly in 3rd person perspective, but when it changes to 1st person, oh man, all I can say is the man has a knack for writing emotionally. Especially the chapter 'Interlude: Hestia'. You should definitely read it from the beginning to feel the build up, and emotions Hestia feels due to guilt from hiding the skills from Bell. (5/5 stars!) Story development, so far its been a great ride. First 2 chapters were a bit similar to the original, but the writer had said he wanted the story to be for those who have never read or watched danmachi so that's justifiable. After chapter 2, things really start to go down. Bell gets stronger, and is not as naive anymore. He gets guidance, and really starts to act somewhat like a 'hero'. However, its only been 7 chapters so I can't really be to sure about the story development but currently its a solid 4 in my opinion. Until more chapters get released. (4.3/5 stars.) Finally, writing quality. In my opinion, it's definitely better than most in this site. Grammar could be mildly improved, but the flow, feel and impact of the story hits like a truck. Therefore, all I can say is that its 5 stars! (5/5 stars.) This is all my opinion, so don't get your hopes up too high. All I can say is that I'm looking forward to what the story has in the future, and how it will develop. Please keep up the great work, Author!