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*I owe nothing in relation to Naruto.
*Expect a really irregular update. I will update it when available, and it may be very frustrating for many of you. Am bussssyyy with school work, unfortunately ;;
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Born within the war, grown within the harsh reality, and bloomed as the man of steel. Is he a human or a monster? Only he himself knows... probably.
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awesomeness. best fight scenes I've ever read, even better than published novels. good use of foreshadowing. The plot twists feel super organic, not too surprising such that it makes no sense, but just the right amount to keep me on the edge of my seat. I normally don't offer any suggestions since most of what I read on this site has so many problems it's useless to address them all, but I feel like this is so good that we can actually do some degree of critical analysis. I think the symbolism could use some small tweaking. the thing about the red cloud I'm still not sure what it's supposed to represent. it's supposed to show the bloody red mist during war, but somehow I feel like the author is trying to portray it as a symbol of hope? the contrast/juxtaposition between heavy non-stop rain and clear weather also feels unclear. I would also suggest the author to improve character development. Although I do know that they are all extremely cute, I still don't really know all that much about nagato, konan, and yahiko besides nagato is shy, konan is encouraging, and yahiko is loyal and ambitious. Especially lacking is the character development of akashi's teacher. When I read that part about the teacher's death, I felt only a small amount of sadness, but otherwise didn't think there was much significance behind it. I think the author is still used to writing one piece where death is treated like mere casualties on the protagonist's path to grow stronger, but the feel around Naruto is totally different. Every death has a meaning, and every situation is connected to a larger plot, not just the protagonist's path of glory. From what I've seen so far (ch 47), lots of the story seems disconnected and that string weaving all the parts masterfully together is still not quite there yet. what I'm saying is of course still not set in stone and the author could continue improving the story and eventually connect everything together, turning this awesome fanfic into a paragon of fanfiction. Even if it doesn't become such a masterpiece, it is still definitely a great, incredibly entertaining read and I'm looking forward to the author's steady improvement. Bravo, BravoBuds.
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trash the author deleted all those negative review, also this fic is just another canon rehash the author even made sure of it he even gave the MC an amnesia so he wont go back to the other 3 and he even made sure to separate the MC from konan nagato and yahiko. the early chapter is quite good thinking it will change anything but nope the author sti follows the canon rehash cliche
!Spoilers! I really enjoyed reading this until you added amnesia yea I know he suffered an injury that could cause it but it just ruins everything
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Anything less than 5/5 for this is a war crime and should be dealt with by giving out the death sentence. Best Naruto fanfic on this site, or any site for that matter :)
It was good except some stupid moments, then the mc for some reason seals his own memories(apparently because of fear) and then after doing nothing acting pathetically for a while he gains a terrible teacher when he could have had Jaryia. I have no idea why he did this to himself.
the story with the most potential on this site!!!! i was suprised when i saw it! Recommended!!!
AYYY MAN UPDATE UR STORY MANNN, I’VE BEEN WAITING WAYYYY TO LONG CMONNNN MANNNNNNN .!.!.&:&;9:&:’mejdjdjfjfjcjkskejjrnnfnfnndndnd d dnd. D d rn d d djcjfndn j. D
giving a review for hardworking author to make sure story is not dropped. word limit begone word limit begone word limit begone word limit begone
One of the most amazing Naruto fanfic. This novel is good. It is absolutely recommended. Thank you author. Hope you can finish it until the end
Read your previous work;it was brilliant. So even without reading it I can tell it will be amazing. So a 5 🌟 from me. ................................
I Usualy dont review untill the end of a book but this has so much potential in it that i have to do it to rase its rank so more people read it
One of the best Naruto fanfictions ever. I like the skill building. I really don’t know what to say. I just know that I was indecisive about this story for a while and now I wish I’d read it sooner and I wish I could threaten the author with a weapon to update everyday
this is perfect, i would say it again this is perfect, i had been fan of yours since struggle of the weak, and every fic you made always make me want to read morethe bad thing is this fic is taking a break right now... right? this is just taking a break right?, its not droped right?
I gotta write a review because I got turned off from this fic because of reading the negative reviews about his amnesia before and got back into it again after reading the authors One Piece White Hunter fic. I have to say those reviews about amnesia are written by actual imbeciles who only read wish-fulfilling harem novels. So, if you also get turned off by those comments, I recommend you continue reading past the amnesia part as it doesnt last long in the first place and has a valid reason behind it. This fic is actually very well written, the character development and the story progression is impeccable. Although its a bit too dark for me, thats just my personal preference and does not impact the quality of the fic itself. Also author, cant believe this fic was left at the massive cliffhanger confrontation. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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a true masterpiece, out of so many fanfics found in webnovels, this is one of my favorites, it's just amazing . Pd:Read it you will not regret it.
Things that i want in a fanfic: 1.No op cheats- ✓ 2.NO HAREM-✓ 3.Good story-✓ 4.Fast updates-✓ 5.Good pqcing-✓ Overall a great story so far been loving it.