Femdom Island

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ElectricLuna

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GodOfLightning

Sorry it seems to be a good story but as soon as he loses parts of his memory I dropped I hate when stories do this it ruins it because we are supposed to be able to imagine ourselves and know one wants to lose a convenient memory that can help them. If you didn’t want the Mc to know where he was going or who his family is you don’t have to give him one I’m guessing he will just remember parts of it at some point that is crucial or the worst of times. How does his sister inherit the family business if she is adopted is something I also want to know there is a bit of forced plot.

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Bestfrienddo

so far the novel has great start, the mc isn't like other mc who are void of emotion and are edgy. i hope mc doesn't become like those other types in future. if its similar to guts from berserk it will be great, because even though he is edgy he also has emotions, kind of makes him really cool character.

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Wild_Zeelo

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Melshan

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SoBored

Does the MC get cheated on yes or no.

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Ramyboyz15

Go read this. Is it unique, dunno but it sure as heck isn’t something you see everywhere so you can at least read this with peace of mind knowing that it won’t give be a waste of time also the scenes are descriptive so if you like lemons good for you but the best thing is that personally its grammar for an author who has two books only on its belt with less than 300 chaps in total its quite great and amazing and icing on it is that the story isn’t looking to be dropped or finished soon considering its type of story has a higher chance of being axed so best of luck author on this story as well as the other one

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Raven_Master

besides some grammar problems witch probably not the authors fault it really good and I hope the author doesn't drop it

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B_L_A_C_K_Soul

I have only read a bit till chapter 32 and it is realy interesting. BUT There is one maaajor flaw that makes the story extremely difficult to read: the timeline! Every time a timeframe like a few days, a year, 5 years ago,... is mentioned, everything just stops making sense. Previously mentioned timeframes suddenly don't work in the new context like: - a timespan that is clearly at most a week suddenly gets compared to a year - MC is an adult, everyone is described as older - but a daughter forgets what happend only 5 years ago!?! - ohh and one year suddenly becomes 5. the timeline is such a giant mess that you are better off just ignoring any and all mentions of time and just think that part yourself. rant over, the premise and story itself seems interesting so far, worth a read, needs heavy editing.

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DaoistuR3MSf

Really enjoyed the story I hope you won't drop it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Loove_Zendaya

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KaiserXIII

Can I get the source for the book cover? Looks interesting.

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Ender_Vate

Well, where to start... until around chapter 120 the story was ok, then the problem begins, the MC becomes a crybaby, who never controlled his power and just complains, then we have the betrayal of women and he throws a tantrum but ends up being all that he doesn't I don't take any action, until we get to 163 where I drop it, I can't stand the MC crying who does nothing and is captured all the time, he is abused by the sirens and that's why he doesn't defend himself, he lets his enemies escape and blame others. .. It was a good job until 120 chapters later it lost its purpose to exist, maybe the MC will become a man later but I won't be here to see it, good luck to those who stay. it is increasingly difficult to find good stories that have continuity and do not get lost.

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Derp_nugget

MC got betrayed, and the girls not listenning to him and said I just want us to move forward and put the past behind us, I will try my best to forget what happened. 💀

Gotta admit the writing was entertaining and full of attention grabbing material but the hurdles of overcoming translation barriers seem brutal. Still a good read in my opinion and would like to continue reading in the future.

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aries_sama

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TheRealDenji

So far I'm on chapter 5, and I already like the pacing, so I'm gonna leave a 5 star for the author. The novel has better grammar compared to most authors who have typos in almost every other sentence. I hope this author doesn't give up on this novel, it has potential.