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Author bought Tony back. do we need anything else to rate it 5 star? Even with that kept aside, the fic is detailed,follows proper pace and is realistic. Grammer is good.
I totally read it as.."I am Iron Man and I'm black" . . Anywas the story is good..recommended. Pin this author please
I read many fic with forced plot, and this fic is definitely one of them -Tony said Friday is monitoring Bucky 24/7, and yet the useless AI still lost sight of Bucky and don't know how it happen -Ross is aiming at Tony, and yet when the whole building is drugged, they left Tony alone instead of kidnapping him -An AI of Tony Stark, got put down by a Virus of all thing -And said AI missed any suspicious movement and got Tony shot, but also the explosion still happen -It's funny how Friday fail to notice an unknown radiowave right in the office of Tony Stark, the author make a reasoning of because it's already there before Tony put Friday in. That is not how it work, it doesn't matter when Tony put Friday in, but that thing should have noticed right away that there is an unknown radiowave transmitting signal somewhere especially when it was right near one of it's server
Started out really good but when it came to the Ross stuff it really fell apart with plot holes
It was good until the point that it wasn't honestly don't believe the OP tag for one cus it gets thrown out the window after about chapter 50 also this dude has no clue how to scale tony to the other hero's or villains making him completely incompetent which clashes with the story to the point that it ruins it.
The story is good but I don't think his character can't represent Tony properly cause one thing Tony stark is known for is he learns from his mistakes and this fanfic mc is still in denial and Tony learnt already about infiltration in his house by fury so he should already have contingency against infiltration
This is my favorite marvel fan fiction yet. Dare I say that this has the same potential as The Wyvern by emmagnetised. The concept and writing is really well done. I really hope this isnโt dropped. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
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aight first of all amazing story but i gotta ask if u got permission from the-writer1988 or not since the story is already completed. And you might just be doing it to increase the viewership which i really am grateful for (or i wouldnt have known about the story), but most people don't read the author note and probably believe you are the author of the story. Some authors don't like this and that's why they don't like it when others publish the story. If you could just comment on his story and perhaps he sees it or just put it in the chapter since everyone reads those. If you do have permission...yeah that's it
So I finished the story on FF, and it's pretty good. Story flow is excellent but can be a little forced sometimes. Towards the end, it felt like the story was on rails though. The story finished in 2020, so it doesn't account for the incoming MCU changes. Therefore, the ending isn't my favorite and was probably better back when it was first written. This is probably in my top 10 best marvel FFs.
Alaye!!!, it's clear that you've put a lot of thought into this fic. The development of the story is superb. You need to work on the speech patterns of done of the characters like Sam saying "I cannot" like a proper British gentleman instead of "I can't" like the black army vet he is. Keep up the good work, I look forward to many more chapters. You're doing 9ja proud.
Love it so far. 13 chapters in. I really like the idea behind it. And i really hope you continue it!
Definitely a unique story. This whole story is basically destroying the plot from the start which is impressive, brave for an author on here to do. Already shown great creativity so far, this story is still in its initial stages but you can already grasp how far reaching the changes will be in this timeline. Definitely been entertaining to read so far. The pace is good, updating speed is great, and no problems with grammar. Story is growing on me and if it keeps up it'll be one of my favorites. Good work so far author! If I've already left a review then disregard one of em. lol I like to read when I'm high and forget my comments
it is a good find. . worth the time you used to read it. . . it is like the series "what if" . . binged read it in one seating. . . read it if you are a fan of marvel. p.s. please don't kill yondu if he is still alive at this point in time
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This is a very detailed and wonderful story so far. Good job author please continue creating your wonderful content ๐ง๐ค๐ค๐