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Snow
Is he stupid or what? Why provoke something is even your instinct telling you that the man in front of you is not simple.
Mc
He is gathering to much attention to himself.
Mc's family
They all are stupid. You see the wolf of your son tried to attacked someone and you don't ask question? Is your son your god? View More
The Life Hacker System · C11
Well ain't this stupid?
Why ask a complete stranger for help for something sensitive? A new bank account? Why not make one himself. He can create a untraceable one with all his skills. And for having a "gamer's mind" it is pretty sure not working by being affected by emotion and sh*t. In the original "the gamer" the mc there is afraid for he is becoming emotionless.
For the doctor, she is pretty stupid for someone who is called a genius. Why didn't question his request? What is she? A d*mb blond?
For his family
Aren't they curious as to why they suddenly lost consciousness and the visitor that the mc is talking about never came? Are they all st*pid?
For the mc
Why keep his family in the dark? Why not tell them some of his ability for them to have an idea. View More
The Life Hacker System · C9
Murderous intent
What is the difference?
If you ask me, they ate the same. The intent to end the life in front of you via killing/murdering them. So why seperate the two? View More
The Life Hacker System · C8
Saving The Future · C15
Saving The Future
Saving The Future · C13
Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C83
In Another World With Escanor Powers · C5
ultimate_boredom: Honestly, if my elder sibling treated me like this, I would be sure that they have become a bank robber or smuggler.
Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C81
RebeLyon: Bro: no sis.. but I broke a few arms and legs
Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C81
RebeLyon: Sis: bro, did you rob a bank? *Cries*
LolInvincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C81
For a complete "the library of heaven's path" it will surely cost alot. View More
DarkerG: I recommend the library of the heaven to have more information about the world and its professions
Exploring another World with a System · C5
I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C856
formoia: Need more must have more chapters
I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C856
xxAsura: Damn it I'm going on machine translation or well only finish the novle in a few years...
I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C856
WRITTING QUALITY
There are some mistake that completely makes the whole sentence wrong. There are grammatical error here and there
STABILITY OF UPDATING
Kinda stable
STORY DEVELOPMENT
The story develop in a weird way that makes no sense
CHARACTER DESIGN
It is a piece of thr*sh!! Most of the characters are beyond stupid. Like abel, getting a blush after he was complimented by his father but before that he was called a windhead ( i presume as airhead ).
WORLD BACKGROUND
Complete garbage. It is clearly that they in the "SUPERNATURAL" world. So author must follow the laws of that said world.
In it, GOD is the origin of magic. Why you ask? Because when rowena ask amara to transport them back in time since GOD is dying (if he can really die) because she cannot live in a world without magic. But amara refuses thats why rowena double crosses amara.
Also, GOD ask the help of the arkangels because he cannot seal his sister (amara) without injuring her.
Also who created the MC, he just appeared out of nowhere then got new memories that comes with a new name and a mission. It means he didn't transmigrate with whole body but just his soul or memory.
Thats for the supernatural part
Mystic eyes of death perception
This eyes have limitation. In the anime where this eye originated from, they cannot kill a being just because night time came, then how can the MC uses this to kill GOD if he doesn't have an actual death.
Also this eyes cannot see through objects like byagugan of naruto world.
For the rest this is my complaint
First
how did the mc acquire the DIAMOND mirror if he doesn't know where to find diamonds.
Second
Where did he acquire the fryingpan he used to cook if he doesn't know how to mine the metal, refined it then forged it to make the frying pan. Remember he is the only sentient being this time period.
Third
How can GOD go to heaven then fight amara in heaven and then the mc saw GOD capturing amara in heaven and then saw GOD retreat to heaven after the fight. Like you are already at home then you went back at home from your home
Fourth
If something is hidden from your sight it means it is in the same plane of your existence. But heaven is not in the sky or hell is not below ground in "supernatural" they are more on a different dimension.
Fifth
How did lucifers knows he cannot grow his hands if it is his first time losing it and experiencing mystic eyes of death perception. View More
Prince of Death
have you seen superman dying of something he lifts? no rigth? View More
Prince of Death · C2
2. adamantium is made made but not made of vibranium.
3. i'm not saying you give him a metal muscle. i'm saying give him the muscle of an insect, if he can succeed, he will be strong since insect is the strongest creature in both world base on their body size.
the metal proto-ademantium (the metal of the shield of captain america) is you use it to convert the bones of the mc into it or infused said metal into it, he will have far more durable bones than wolverine. or you can just infused ademantium like in project-x then just transmute it later to proto-ademantium.
for the skin part, just make a mesh like a net of the said metal under his skin to make him bullet proof.
phoenix force
phoenix force, as in its name a force. it is a sentient energy (like the speed force in DC). for it having a soul, i don't have an idea but i'm pretty sure it is far more powerful compared to all the souls of human in the whole world so a simple soul storing method used in making the philosopher stone may not work if it has a soul.
wait!! if you think about it, if the soul of a human can be used as an energy source to bypass the equivalent exchange law, then it can be said that the said energy is what made the phoenix force not the soul itself but the energy of the soul. so the MC needs a pretty powerful circle to trap the phoenix force by force. hehehe
Hohenheim's philosopher stone
please don't compare the phoenix force to that trash stone
p.s. after obtaining the philosopher's stone made from the phoenix force you can make the MC a homunculi. IMMORTALITY baby!!
p.p.s. thanks for the conversation and for the great work!! View More
F5Sect_Founder: Wait, i got your ideia but there are a few things that have to be explained.
1- When u mix metals they will always be alloys, because the metals have different molecular composition, they will never combine 100%
2- Adamantium is an alloy made of vibranium.
3- I understand wanting to power up the MC with metal muscles, but vibranium is an energy dampener. That means the blood's heat will be taken, the kinetic energy of the bloodstream, or even the metal's malleability have to be taken in account. Wolverine died due to metal poisoning from adamantium. And he have super healing.
So, I want to make an OP character, yes, but in the future, after struggles, and only using "rules" of the marvel and FMA world.
I will use an example that is possible with the 2 worlds rules, but will NOT happen on this story, so you have an idea.
Using the soul storing method that is used to make the philosopher's stone, to actually trap the Phoenix force. Its "possible", and that will make an extremely powerfull stone, probably the closest thing to the legends of unlimited transmutation, because the Phoenix force is an energy based lifeform of such magnitude, has a soul made by the universe itself and tempered by time since its creation, and represents the rebirth cicle, that is actually another way to see alchemy's fundamental law. It's essentially the perfect material. And if the Phoenix's soul collaborates, the stone will be even better, like Hohenheim's.
Its OP, and inside the rules, but saying that I will make a magic metal that acts like muscles is impossible, without the whole structure being changed, then he would be a cyborg instead.Fullmetal Alchemist? in Marvel Universe
How ignorant are you to say such thing? Base on your review you haven't read a lot of original novel out there.
Many different novel has a lot of MC that was once a great power but reincarnated by some circumstances amd they have pretty much advantage compare to others for example
Returning from the immortal world
Realms of myths and legends
Tales of demons and gods
Emperor's domination
Reverend insanity View More
frenchray1: This novel is one of the best rebirth or reincarnation so far. Some rebirth or reincarnation novels are pretty bad that the mc in it does not seem an old monster since their rebirth did not manage them to get an advantage to the rest, but the mc in this novel has it. What's even interesting is we won't need to worry about the mc since he is an unscrupulous person, accompanied by comedic situations. What we need right now is a mass release!! Give this novel a try surely you'll like this!!
The Man from Hell
How ignorant are you to say such thing? Base on your review you haven't read a lot of original novel out there.
Many different novel has a lot of MC that was once a great power but reincarnated by some circumstances amd they have pretty much advantage compare to others for example
Returning from the immortal world
Realms of myths and legends
Tales of demons and gods
Emperor's domination
Reverend insanity View More
frenchray1: This novel is one of the best rebirth or reincarnation so far. Some rebirth or reincarnation novels are pretty bad that the mc in it does not seem an old monster since their rebirth did not manage them to get an advantage to the rest, but the mc in this novel has it. What's even interesting is we won't need to worry about the mc since he is an unscrupulous person, accompanied by comedic situations. What we need right now is a mass release!! Give this novel a try surely you'll like this!!
The Man from Hell
How ignorant are you to say such thing? Base on your review you haven't read a lot of original novel out there.
Many different novel has a lot of MC that was once a great power but reincarnated by some circumstances amd they have pretty much advantage compare to others for example
Returning from the immortal world
Realms of myths and legends
Tales of demons and gods
Emperor's domination
Reverend insanity View More
frenchray1: This novel is one of the best rebirth or reincarnation so far. Some rebirth or reincarnation novels are pretty bad that the mc in it does not seem an old monster since their rebirth did not manage them to get an advantage to the rest, but the mc in this novel has it. What's even interesting is we won't need to worry about the mc since he is an unscrupulous person, accompanied by comedic situations. What we need right now is a mass release!! Give this novel a try surely you'll like this!!
The Man from Hell
The translation have a grammar issue but most concerning part is the misplace words. It is like the auhtor deliberately cuts the word into two like "wh at th e hel l"
STABILITY OF UPDATING
Can be considered good
STORY DEVELOPMENT
The way the story progress is way too fast. Too fast it can confuse you.
CHARACTER DESIGN
For a man from hell he sure suffers from pretty human emotions. Camaraderie? Not taking revenge from people who messes with you like his ex girlfriend? What kind of a demon is that!!
WORLD BACKGROUND
It has little to none world background. As an example, for a underground fight it is pretty famous that even a regular joe in the bar knows the champion same goes for top military personelle. The gang members can easilly barge in a classroom. Or the like the paparazzi that can not only easily enter a high end hotel but also storm in a room of a pretty well known person amd the said person didn't react to the intrusion. And the killer part is every body can feel QI.
All in all, this novel is dying as the story progress View More
The Man from Hell
You can creat a completely different metal by combining both the ademantium and vibranium. Not a simple combination or like an alloy but a new metal.
You can infused said metal into his bones and change the MC skin into a metal mesh to make it durable.
Since transmutation of whole human is forbidden you cam bypass it by transmuting parts by part like the MUSCLE of the mc to the of insect to make him stronger.
He can also make new element as a power source and the like. View More
F5Sect_Founder: Hey guys, just asking for reviews, really, I have put a steady 4 there, and I ask u to put anything. Give me your opinion, is it bad? Say it, Good? Say it even more. Just don't tell me it's short cause I know it, but I'll try to do 1 chapter every day around this size or bigger. So review dammit.
Fullmetal Alchemist? in Marvel Universe
You can creat a completely different metal by combining both the ademantium and vibranium. Not a simple combination or like an alloy but a new metal.
You can infused said metal into his bones and change the MC skin into a metal mesh to make it durable.
Since transmutation of whole human is forbidden you cam bypass it by transmuting parts by part like the MUSCLE of the mc to the of insect to make him stronger.
He can also make new element as a power source and the like. View More
F5Sect_Founder: Hey guys, just asking for reviews, really, I have put a steady 4 there, and I ask u to put anything. Give me your opinion, is it bad? Say it, Good? Say it even more. Just don't tell me it's short cause I know it, but I'll try to do 1 chapter every day around this size or bigger. So review dammit.
Fullmetal Alchemist? in Marvel Universe
The way the story is told is like writing a journal. Like you are trying to have a conversation to your self.
The MC is not OP but has a potential to be OP.
Just imagine, making the strongest metal on earth be your skeleton. Or making a much better supersoldier serum.
The only limit is your own imagination if you powers like than.
Add this novel to your library folks! View More
Fullmetal Alchemist? in Marvel Universe
for sight
shark
electromagnetic senses
snake
heat vision
bat and dolphins
echolocation
bedbugs, mosquito, cichlid and mantis shrimp
infrared vision
spider, scorpions and crickets
vibration on the ground
(now make him blind b*tches!)
strength
dung beetle
running speed
tiger beetles
flying speed
dragonfly
jumping power
flea
ironclad beetle
for armor
tardigrade (water bear)
total resilience.
for poison
well there are many
box jelly fish
king cobra
marbled cone snail
blu-ringed octopus
death stalker scorpion
stone fish
pufferfish
wardering spider
inland taipan
poison dart frog
sea snake View More
DC: PROTOTYPE · C5
