Slytherin devil

LV 14

Brezer

I really can't see the story going far. the mc picked options from an app and then he is killed and sent to hp land. the mc chose a demon race with demon magic... so I have no idea how the whole hp verse is going to work for him since he has no "wizard magic" there is no way he is going to hogs. let's not say anything about the book at hogs, since he has no wizard magic only demon he won't show up in the book and won't get a letter to go to hogs and if he keeps leaving his demon8c ritual areas in the open and close to his place he l8ves he will die at an early age. writing is ok, mc is lazy so m7ch so he was a fat pig in the previous life and his sin is about being lazy so going to be another tubo again and he gave himself white hair and purple eyes like an idiot... hmm I am a demon so I should make myself stand out so much I get noticed.so ya read at your own risk

LV 1

Abyss_lake_Guily

I'm very interested in this, the story is immersive, and it seems to be going a different route than what I normally see, in fanfics, you can find some problems in the writing, nothing too serious. I will give 5 stars for potential.

LV 2

Gratiz_

It's just boring. Mc should spice the hp world up with his demon lineage and all, but all we get is random events happening around mc and the story about a demon. I hate it when author's change fanfic worlds for no reason at all.

LV 1

InternetSaint

The MC is a socially stunted rtard with no morals.

LV 1

Darkiling

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lector_enfermo

Realmente uno de los mejores fic de Harry Potter, el autor toma una idea nueva y refrescante y la aplica maravillosamente además no se queda con el ya aburrido canon de Harry Potter y comienza a modificarlo.

LV 15

Cat_Lover152

I am really enjoying this please keep writing it has the potential to be a truly wonderful rendition of the harry potter universe and i hope you enjoy creating the story as much as we enjoy reading it

LV 3

Tyler_rigby

I like he is pretty much evil he doesn't really care about lives like the first dudes soul he absorbed he felt guilty for a bit then accepted it

LV 15

Patrick_hell

I like your story it's very interesting to listen to

LV 13

VectorKVisemen

It’s the best I can’t even explain how I love this work just wish it would update new chapters

LV 2

ILAIDOI

It's amazing, the growth in general of the mc is very well written in my opinion pls dont drop, this is one of my favourite hp fanfics.

LV 4

Daoist4YHrB8

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LV 1

odalis_fernandez

Me encantaaaaaa mucho esta historia, es unica y me gustaria que sigas como estas, gracias y por favor sigue así ❤️ <3 <3 ❤️ <3 <3 ❤️ <3 <3 <3 ❤️ <3 <3 <3 ❤️ <3 <3 <3 ❤️

LV 12

Abyssal_CrabGOD

will there be demon summoning in that case he would be a warlock instead of a wizrd

LV 15

MadFool

Decent idea but the execution of it sadly failed. The story comes out feeling dry and boring. So far Mc hasn’t stumbled into major events or characters and I get that author wants to advance with a steady pace but there is a difference between steady and agonizingly slow. I have seen many aspiring authors makung the same mistake, they lose many of their readers because they stretch the introduction/training arcs for too long with nothing noteworthy truly happening.

LV 4

schmitt

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