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Tyler was just an average salaryman on earth, but fate played a cruel joke on him. Forcing him to climb the tower he didn’t ask to.
Powers that was only a dream yesterday, suddenly became reality in his hand.
Being from an average salaryman, to a blessed of the tower.
Come and join him on his journey in climbing, and conquering the tower.
Would the price paid be worth it?
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Hello,it's my first novel please forgive me if i make mistakes,your comments and reviews really mean a lot to me since i can improve myself through your thoughts about story. I will make sure to make a story that you won't regret adding to your library.
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Overall this is a wonderful start! If you're considering giving it a read, please do! I'm impressed by the details with each new chapter. The world the author is setting up is definitely going to grow into something amazing. My only critique is possibly breaking up some of the longer paragraphs. On an online reading platform, it tends to make the info easier to digest in smaller chunks. There are also some errors with past vs present tense not being consistent. The small issues are very fixable and the book is shaping up to be so much fun. Excited to see what's next for this one
Seems like I'll be your harshest review yet. Good. The writing quality could be better, due to small mistakes here and there, like redundancy and verb tenses, but there are no glaring typos or the such, so 4 stars anyway. The update stability is good. 5 stars Story development, to me, is lacking. Nothing happens really in 6 chapters, albeit the very funny humor. 2 stars. The character design is good. You clearly represent your character as a gym bro and make him funny in his inner musings and interactions with monsters. 5 stars. World background is still lacking. We don't know much about his original world nor the tower, for now. 3 stars
Tower of God, Second Life Ranker, I'm the only one loved by the constellation. although I never read the novels, only manga. sure this is what their novels would look like and I LOVE it! Added.
I really like these kind's of novels, they remind of the big korean ones, like Solo Leveling or the hole Tower Ascension Genre. The author is new, so I am very excited to see where this story goes. persistence is everything, I do not mind small mistakes as long as the author keeps up with the good work.
Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰
Promising story, it has a great first chap and no grammar mistakes, the story hooks you at the very first lines. I really like the humor, the academy thing really hit my weak point.
Pretty cool, the mc isn't hard to follow and the story talks on demon and monsters.
This Mc was quite entertaining, I liked it sorry if am not giving enough details in this review haha
Great start to the story, hooked me right in. Loved the gym-related humor, could relate to it.
The story is quite capturing and keeps you hooked to it . Worth the read . Will really be looking forward to updates[img=update]
The writing quality is pretty solid although I won't say it's perfect. The humor is pretty good too but the author keeps breaking the wall and welll that's just not for me but there are people who enjoy this style of writing more than me.
The story is very intruding. The usage of grammar is spot on and it had an interesting plot and storyline. The author indeed did a great job with this book. I can't wait for the next update. keep it up author.
A good read! As some others have said there are some choppy bits in terms of repeated words/missing transitions but, for me, your use of excellent word choice lets me see past that. Your descriptions are very impactful and leave a lasting image in my mind. Nice work!
Writing Quality: As English is not your first language, I am happy to say that your writing quality really surprises me here. You do consistently struggle with missing conjunction words, like "the" or "its" but they don't detract from the viewer's reading of the story. You also tend to struggle with correct tenses here and there. Stability of Updates: As your novel is still very new, I am going to give this an automatic 5 but you have been updating daily, which is the best thing you can do. Story Development: An interesting attempt at a cliched and tried and true story. The actual plot has been progressing smoothly and the author does not drag the story through too much at a time from what has bee currently published. Not much has actually happened within the first six chapters, but the story is progressing nicely at a good pace. Character Design: Tyler is an interesting MC and the author has done a good job at presenting him to the readers. I surprisingly enjoyed his inner monologues, which seemed to almost break the 4th wall, but didn't. His interactions with the tower admin were brief but left me wanting more. World Background: Not much here, but we have been given quite a good amount of information within the first two chapters, which makes me curious for what's in store for Tyler. Overall: Excellent first novel! If you had said English was your first language, I'd have believed you! The combat is pretty good, interesting, and and the formatting for the novel is great. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
pour le premier livre j'adore et j'aime le fait qu'il aille beaucoup de détail mais je n'ai pas mis 5 étoile car je trouvait que le début en avait un peut trop mais sinon ses très bon comme livre je le recommende
So far the story seems quite interesting despite a few mistakes made. Will be waiting for the next chapters.
Overall a good chapter. There were a good amount of mistakes however, and I hope you take my criticism as advice rather than insult. Grammer and punctuation as a whole could be improved. The entire premise of the first part of the chapter was quite entertaining, although written in a confusing manner. However, the sudden switch to Tyler made little sense, still, it was good. Although the gym rocks, I feel like the entire rest of the chapter shouldn't have revolved around it. The world got into the tower just randomly at the end, when I feel like that could have been the main character of the chapter instead of just the gym. Overall tho, good chap!
Hello guys,i am the author. I can't give my work 5 stars like other authors because i know where i lack,my writing quality is bad really bad, but i will improve myself. Character design i don't have a absolute idea on what to do with other characters design other than MC but i will make sure to make some few characters that will be funny to read. World background and power levels is going to be a little bit unique though not much different from other other novels. Stability of Updates will always be on time as long as i don't have a serious problem,so you can count on me that you will read one chapter a day. Your reviews and comments are appreciated guys.Thank you.
My fetish for transmigration books makes me like the novel and my recent love for boos involving system...🥺🥺 Book gats potential and me can't wait to see it go places💃No errors or anything, cool book😛