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A young boy is mysteriously transported into the world of Naruto, where he must navigate a dangerous landscape filled with ninjas and other threats. With the help of a system ability implanted in his mind, he sets out on a journey to survive and find his place in this new world. Along the way, he must confront challenges and make difficult decisions that will shape his destiny. As he grows and learns, he must decide whether to use his newfound abilities for good or for evil. [thumbnail nor any characters except for the mc is mine]
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Novel has a lot of potential. Not much to say since it's barely starting off but so far I'm liking the quality.
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I mean, the writing from a pure grammatical standpoint is pretty flawless. Good transitions as well as decent structure. However, that is it; there's nothing else for me to say good about. The story is simply bland; the writing is bland with no detail or exposition. Everything is written like I'm reading an explanation of some sort. It's simple as... nothings engaging me to read. Where's the showing of mc interacting with others? Where's the unveiling of showing how MC is truly feeling? Why does it feel like I'm reading a bland archetype of a character with no soul to him? Author, I suggest you to detail and outline you fics before writing. That's all I have to say to be honest. I'd give it a generous 2.6/5