Obtained Yamamoto Genryusai template after joining the Straw Hats

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Izanmi

Seriously? Having the mc join the straw hats is already a bad point for this story; but on top of that the 'author' copies the original dialogues letter by letter? This is absurd. Many Chinese fanfics that follow this same theme do the same, and each of them can be summed up in a single word: Rubbish! (Google translate)

LV 5

Dracmon13

ah I remembered you , you are the one who only puts the character as an extra and picks up the plot of the anime , My note for this fanfic =0 [Google Translation]

LV 3

Onions

neat so far, definitely would've preferred if Mc stayed as an old man tho

LV 10

asaade

he will be luffy's dog and its pretty much a canon rehash 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0

LV 4

DaoistlcQyQq

This is basically the copy of original OP with a new side character for the straw hats.😒😒😒😒😒🤮

LV 5

CandyChopper

This is just canon with extra character.

LV 1

NicolasDC

cosas buenas de el fanfic : la internación entre los personajes ( anque es copia y pega la mayoría es interesante ) y los primeros capítulos ( uno y dos ) . cosas malas : la mayoría de el fanfic , la falta de creatividad , el mc teniendo lo recuerdo de 2000 años de yamamato sigue pareciendo que no tiene experiencia , lo forzado que es todo , que es todo copiado y pegado de one piece con ligera modificación , el mc parece mas personaje de fondo que los mismos personajes de fondo , la poca inteligencia del mc eso que tiene experiencia de si vida pasada y 2000 años de recuedos , como no dicen nada cuando de ser un flaco se vuelve super musculoso pero sus compañeros no comentan nada , el autor no reponde los comentarios aunque sean contructivos , y seguiria pero no tengo ganas , en resumen es la típica historia que se abandona en un rato y es basura ( anque la idea es muy buena y no lo voy a negar , pero esta muy mal echo ) yo lo abandone en el capítulo 18 es su decisión si quieren seguir viendo ... les deseo a todos suerte [ ni ganas de usar traductor Google ]

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc isn't Mc. Mc is dog. Mc is cuck man🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩🐩[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp]

LV 4

seal_teamvi

well, its dog water, literally very bad.

LV 6

SDIVAD

It’s an overall good story idea The idea is nice and the way it’s played out isn’t terrible but the English is really off putting. It’s not terrible, I’ve seen much worse, it’s readable albeit with a headache. Again I don’t want to offend the author because I actually enjoyed the idea of the story (I read 7 chapters before I gave up) but it’s not that great maybe some people can power through but I can’t Keep up the work and maybe you get better at writing

LV 14

the_great_old_one

I didn't even read this novel yet but I already love this novel. anything to do with the captain's power is fun to read

LV 6

Byluffy02

There are hundreds of books that make up their own crew, and they're all left unfinished. so shut your mouth if you don't want to read you can go. For those who gave low marks without reading the book, all I can say is gfy.

LV 4

ArdaPendragon

It's not original. Same as anime and he joins strawhat ..................................................................................................................................................................

LV 2

nubsours

Really bad should had an original plot at least + the mc know thing he should not about one piece or even know the world...........................................................................

LV 4

Foodi

great story and concept but the grammar and writing style are just horrible for me to read

LV 4

LGK_maore

any thing in this ff ...... copmpletely awesome ....... ........ ... ... ........... .. ........... ..... ................ ...... .

LV 5

TyrantTron335

I'm interested....................................