Group Chat in Douluo Dalu

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LaziestMan

i sewer harem is gonna ruin this fanfiction

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DetachedDreamer

The characters personalities aren't attractive at all. their backstories are seen through a delusional child so somehow they are redeemable lol and he lies his best to make us believe that. There is a lot wrong with the MC, the inferiority complex he has towards tang San, possibly all MCs is palpable. pretty sad because the story itself is unique enough and creative. I enjoy chat group stories and this is written well. Just couldn't knock it out the park with the characters. give it a chance before judging.

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Sosynovsky

Short chapters composed of repeated system notifications, which are completely useless to story development. Dumb mc, characters- puppets. Djdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjjdjjdjdjdjddj

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LaziestMan

hello if you like novels then go read "I crossed over with Immortal System" i am sure you will like it

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Ulescu_Mihai

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

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Daoist060193

another harem with a stupid main character who behaves like a young master and immediately reveals all the cards and gives slaps in the face.

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Warren_Yanga

another og mc hater lol bunch of simps................................................................................................................

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Rickyson

o MC e estupido, hipócrita e imaturo design muito ruim ele praticamente não se desenvolve talves no futuro melhore ou tenha uma reescrita o tema e os personagens são novos no tipo Chat dimencional diferente de outras fic que sempre coloca os personagens pricipais, porem o autor escreve muito rapido o envolvimento como se estivesse com pressa de terminar,a qualidade da escrita e aceitavel, estabilidade de atualições são constante, eu particulamente nao vou ler nao gostei, mas tem gente que gosta então boa leitura.

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LaziestMan

is it Harem or single heroine or no love interest

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TakeruNobunaga

It's an ok novel to pass time if you turn your reasoning off, then why not. 5 stars cause why not, it did entertain me a little. sfaffafsggagssgaggssggaghhvshshsgsahhshshshshaahahsgsgsggsgagahashshshahahashddhshahhshsdhshhsahhddshhsshs

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Muhamed_Suroor

let the chat be only girls. but the old fanfic group chat for girls was interesting, it’s a pity they left it [img=recommend][img=update][img=exp]

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Vermont_

5 stars for a great story⭐️⭐️⭐️. . . .

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Almas_Farhan_Arnob

nice story hope you wont drop this....try to get deepth in emotion it will get better... i love these character whom the chat group has contained....

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To3Na1ls

more, please .

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Immortal_Panda

the Mc has a chinese young master syndrome

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damdidum

Another stupid MC with young master syndrome.

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Ebo_Eboo

es el mejor fan fic de chatear que leído, lo único que lamento es que sean tan pocos capítulos, me gusta la personalidad que ke diste al MC que no sea como en la mayoría de las series que se enfoca en hacer lo posible por perseguir a las mujeres sino que todo es moderado, además de las integrantes son nuevas y no repetitivas como en en algunos casos

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s_b8099

I had a rocky start , but it has great character development and entertaining personalities and a nice pace to the story . Overall a fun read .

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Efthee

I read through volume 1 completely. I liked the system and pretty much everything but this is just turning into a heavy harem fic where the chat system only summons girls and they will end up with mc sooner or later so there's really not much suspense, as for plot it's pretty much whatever is going in canon. summary- the fic is definitely not bad but it's quite generic in my opinion.