I AM EONE

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doradoragon

All I can say is WOW BRUH😫😩🤩 first chapter gave me them chills🫣DAUYUMN!🫣 AH YES~ I love me some sci-fi novels like this😌😌q(≧▽≦q) Such a refreshing story😩✨

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BlAkE_M

I am delighted to write a review for the author whose book is not only good, but also captivating and well-written. First, synopsis (According to me) "I Am Eone" is a thrilling and engaging story that combines science fiction and fantasy elements into a unique and exciting world. The story follows the journey of Eone, a young man who is suddenly thrust into a world of magic and mystery. As Eone begins to uncover the truth about his past and the world around him, he must navigate dangerous political intrigue and ancient secrets in order to survive. World-building (According to me) The author has created a rich and detailed world filled with unique magic systems, creatures, and cultures. The world feels alive and vibrant, and it's easy to become immersed in the story. The author has also done an excellent job of slowly revealing the details of the world, keeping the reader engaged and intrigued. Characters (According to me) The characters are also well-written and memorable. The characters feel real and their actions and reactions are not forced, making it easy to empathize with them. The author has done an excellent job of creating characters that are both relatable and memorable. Eone is a relatable protagonist who faces challenges and setbacks but remains determined to uncover the truth. The supporting characters are also well-developed, each with their own motivations and personalities. Grammar (According to me) While there are some inevitable grammar mistakes in the book, they do not disturb the flow of the chapters. The story flows smoothly and the mistakes do not detract from the quality of the book. Additionally, the updates are consistent, which is always appreciated by readers who are following a series like me. Improvements (According to me) The area for improvement is the pacing and the length of the chapters. While the length of the chapters is not a major issue, some readers may find them a bit short. Expanding the length of the chapters would give the author more room to develop the story and characters even further. Where as, at times, the story can feel slow or meandering, particularly in the earlier chapters. However, this is a minor issue, and the story overall is well-structured and engaging. Overall "I Am Eone" is a well-crafted webnovel that combines science fiction and fantasy elements into a unique and engaging story. With its well-developed characters and rich world-building, this webnovel is sure to entertain fans of the genre. I highly recommend this author and their book. Again it's a well-crafted story with engaging characters, an intriguing plot, and consistent updates. With a little bit of polishing, this author has the potential to become a bestseller in no time. Thankyou for listening to this junior rant....🙏🙏🙏

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prajnya_shriyan

Really captivating plot. It has great potential. The chapters are short just the way I like it, because in my opinion long chapters sometimes go boring. Overall it's a really good novel.

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BambooFirefly

So... I could have buttered it up. But it would have been unfair to you as a writer who genuinely want to improve yourself. So, I'm NOT sugar coating my words, nor my review. Apologies in advance if you get hurt by it. 1. Let us talk about the writing flow first: You wrote: "Thunder roaring and clouds raining as if the sky was crying itself." okay I admit that this sentence has artistic sense. It does, but you could have phrased it better. Let me give you example. (I don't claim mine is any better but still) "Thunder roared in the sky as the rain poured relentlessly. The clouds rumbled as the streaks of lightning flashed. The downpour was as if the heavens itself was weeping." somewhat better, don't you think? Anyway, I can see that you are a new writer and I do not hold it against you. Your writing style is disrupting the flow of the story. I am sure you'll improve with time and practice. 2. Grammatical errors: They are unavoidable. Here and there, some spelling mistakes, use of wrong words to describe something. That's fine. Eg: "She was imitating dangerous killing intent" could have been "She was emitting/She gave off a dangerous killing intent/her poise harboured murderous aura" Punctuation has errors here and there. over all this story definitely has potential. Isekai is an interesting genre and your take on it is interesting as well. It has potential, waiting for the plot to unfold as the story progresses.[img=update][img=Loving it]

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MilkAndSausage

I could see that this story is a type of writing close to the Author's heart. It has decent grammar, and an intriguing system that Isekai and System fans may like. The starting chapter shows a glimpse of what may happen in the future that let the reader anticipate what process will he do to get there. Anyway, this is a nice story with great potential

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Slayer0

I like the story so far, it has great potential, as an Indian, I love that you included Indian settings and characters in the story. I would love to read the rest.

LV 3

TranslatorKun

Character building is good, the dialogues feel genuine, easy to understand English and no grammar mistakes. All isekai stories have good potential and this is no exception. The chapter length needs to be long though.

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Taylor_Valk

Woooooooooo!!!!!!! Now that's how you wow someone. From the synopsis, to the cover, to the drawings; and the first chapter. I love it. Keep up the great work. This story is going place

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Rainandstorm

Wow, I am really speechless right now 😂😂... This book is amazing, Men, it totally is.. First chapter alone is just wow

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mattfuncool

Well, all I can say is it's OK. I honestly don't have anything special to say. Just keep updating. Doubt, check Grammer and keep up the story.

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DubiousTone

I'm really excited about the development of this novel! I've only read the first three chapters, but already I'm hooked. The world the author has created is amazing, full of magic and adventure. The characters are really interesting, and the story is full of surprises. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters and find out what happens next. Bookmarked and eagerly anticipating the release of more chapters.

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shreya_ki

I really love the story. I read the chapters and they were nice. I can see potential in you. Keep going author.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Joshan_Jo

The story is interesting, especially the start. I liked how the author tried to embed his knowledge and values of his origin in novel. The writing quality is also good and the author did a good job in making the novel little humorous. Overall, it's a good read. Fighting author

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JA_Chrysant

Superb, at last, someone writes with good grammar, structure, etc. The story is engaging too. Though, the MC impact kind of lack when he first noticed he was in another world.

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BS_Entertainment

Great story so far, with accurate pacing and well thought out structure. The development of the character through his journey is an exciting one, as I am a sucker for any evolution type stories. An amazing story highlighting a culture in writing that I barely see represented. 100% recommend