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he restarted on chapter 17 to nerf the MC when he could have just evolved the story or world... left himself so many outs and used none.... not recommended.
I'm leaving, it doesn't last a single chapter, it's an absolute aberration that doesn't make any sense. At least one example is the [Reality Manipulation] skill, with that power alone the other wishes are useless. . .
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I read your other book Reincarnated in Eragon and saw this book afterwards. So I decided to give it a read too, and I was not disappointed. Keep up the good work. P.S. I hope you continue the erago fanfic too, or do another one like it.
I must say I'm rather really liking this re write of yours, although it does feel fast pased, but it's still interesting a fun to read, and I quit like the world travel system. as long as it isn't used like every 5 chapters then it's all good, I mean I don't mind if he can go back to the world's he has already been too but remember this is a twilight main, please keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait for more.
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listen you f up with the rewrite made people wait for a copy and paste 3 chapters and then made it a non harem multiverse fic not for me it was good before the rewrite
It's a great Twilight (and maybe many more other universe) fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a good plot/storyline (but the story is too fast paced) and a good english/translate.. I like the Idea that MC/Hadrian is with Alice, and he not change the plot/story too much.. I also like the idea about the aircraft, electric car, etc.. I don't mind his power to change/teleport to other universe, but I think he too fast to go to DC.. Maybe make him use his power more in Twilight (or until 1 book is done), then he can go to other universe after that.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍
The story is good, but it could be better I have several things to do that would make the novel better First, the pace in the novel is so fast that I'm reading a race and I'm not a novel. Try to slow the pace down a bit Secondly, the conversations between the characters are very fast, short, and very brief, to the point that you feel that the person speaking is a robot and not a person. Try to make the conversation longer and do not try to make the conversation a question and answer only by making it closer to the method of discussing things or a dialogue between Characters Thirdly, add the signs SLICEOFLIFE and OVERPOWERED to the summary, because they are appropriate for this novel Fourth, the explanations that the main character gives to others are very simple and naive, such as when he told the story of how he discovered his strength, and this also did not answer them when they asked about his strength, but they accepted it. Fifth, Alice's character in this novel does not look like Alice in the movie. Alice's character in this novel really looks like a 15- or 16-year-old girl who is in love with roses,Not alice the mature vampire who is over 100 years old and has the power to see the future I hope that my review will be useful to you and please do not stop this novel
So this review is hard because you have the before and after rewrite. Before, pretty good start, but power creep went waaaaay to fast. The restart is much better and definitely has potential to be something awesome
No synopsis = 1 Star If your gonna be too lazy to make a synopsis, I’ll be too lazy to read your fanfic.