Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.

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Cocoerloko

A new way to write a DC Fanfic, I sincerely like it and I hope Author does not listen to people who criticize him and does not abandon this fanfic. 10/10

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CBH_X_GRIM

the chapters are too short to the point that you would have to wait for 30 chapters to equal one chapter of other books.

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UnKnoWn12345678910

I really like it longer chapters would be awesome but that does not mean it’s bad so me likey

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Adracoda

like the concept, like how he formed the observers. pls don't do some thing like observer's betraying him in middle of story. hope author continues writing and don't leave in middle,,

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Saiyan_Of_God

Although It's a great fanfic there are a few inconsistencies that I found first is the MC interaction wit people like Adam and Eve, The Presence, Lucifer,Vandal Savage, and the Time Traveling heroes that appeared in the Comics, If the Mc is from the Dawn of Time, Then The Whole World would have records of him From Ancient Sankrit all the way to the Bible Since HE IS the GOD OF HUMANITY. There is also the short chapters UPDATE stability. All in all it needs a few tweaks or more research of the DC Universe and its characters as a whole. I just hope its not another of those dropped fanfic that have great potential but the author lost interest. I look forward to seeing the Authors imagined version of the Dc Universe and join the Mc on his adventures. P.S.: The dropped Dc Fanfic im talking about are: 1. Zenith: Last Revenant 2.DC : Reborn & Just Living Life 3. How I,Vandal Savage's brother, became a pirate king too early 4. A Glitch In The System(DC) The Author could gain inspiration from these fanfics and make it even better for more world immersion. I hope he doesn't drop this like the others and atleast give us an ending or closure.!!! HOPE IT HELPS 😊😊😊

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Lucas_Oliveira_2302

I really liked this fanfiction but why the MC refuses to become the ruler? surely he could do a great job the way things are going so far and will the MC have any love interests? if so i hope it's supergirl or some goddess after all these species don't die of old age and are very powerful

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Kyndig19

Going to be honest this is a good idea for a story but the author will most likely drop it because there isn’t anyone who realistically posses a threat to the Mc even thousands of years before the main characters of dc start showing up. If it were a slower burn or build up of his strength it would have a longer story but with his quick growth it’s not going to have any suspense going forward.

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Crimson_Reapr

Although the chapters are short the story itself is veru interesting it draws you in, it leaves you craving for more. Now to the actual review: WQ: 4*, overall it's good but there are a good number of grammatical errors and using different pronouns in the same sentence SD: 5*, it kind of breezes through the past, but who cares, it does a good job in explaining and setting up the stage for the story. CD: 5*, I like the MC, he's ruthless towards his enemies and kind to his people. US: 3*, 1 Chap/week, so not the best when the chapters are quite short, but quality over quantity I guess. WB: 4*, just like the author does a good job setting up the stage for our MC and his people to shine, he does a good job on showing what's going on around the world but it's not the greatest. Overall Rating: 4.2*

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wisdomkeeper

Randomly searched fanfic and stumble upon this masterpiece. Sadly, waiting for new chapter itself was torture 😭

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quaint

i have issues with the way the plot went, it was really good until he fought the gods. and then the author seemed to have not planned the story out and now he spread manga and is going out on a boat pretending to be Luffy. the story was great in the beginning but it slowly becomes more crack as it goes on.

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LastGod

It was good to an extent, but trying to rewrite the lore of DC universe was never gonna go well. You should have skipped forward after a while to him being in the DC universe instead. Trying to flush out your characters arc within the past lore of DC... just, it's a mess.

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CelestialObserver

This is a really good story the author did a very good job i'm hoping it does not get dropped[img=update][img=recommend]

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Durjoy_Jack

The author started with the best concept and best story type. Honestly this kind of fanfic is quite rare. Even if there are some of them but the author drops this kind of series but I really hope You will continue it you have all of our support and don't listen to those retards who complain about grammatical errors or say it's unreadable. Don't listen to them and continue and take your time and just...

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Azathoth2

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Odie_1255

Just keep going you got darn GENIUS this fanfic is dope and I encourage everyone to read it 🫵🏾👍🏾😌

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XavierKing_6497

I love the way the story a lot, the world building is okay, liking the update stability but I don't like the way it is short I would prefer you either increase them or do double chapters, and you should also give depth to story for example you can explain things better like his fights with the titans or even his interaction with peoplealso it will be preferable to not summarize them the story too much

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AC_adaptor_the_2

so good if you pass through 10 chapters you will notice drastically changed to the long and way of writing but it is good I definitely recommend it.

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B0BO_KABA

I LOVE YOUR WORK, PLEASE DON'T DROP THISSSSSSS, I CANNOT EXTEND MY WORDS JUST PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR GOOD WORK AND NEVERMIND IF THERE ARE HATERS

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Tam132

It's good. .

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Gideon_Samuelson_5974

love the story and premise I love how it is executed even more the only problem I have with it is that there isn't enough book to your book