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Rubble moves, and a corpse arises from the dirt. He pushes charred wood off his legs, and scares away the crows that had just been about to peck his eyes. Colour returns to his cheeks so quickly as to terrify the snow from his face, forcing it to melt. The nearby rodents are reluctant to flee. They hide under the charred remains of what had been a town just a few days ago, and they greedily eye the giant youth who had seemingly just returned to life, muttering something about a “System”.
Vol is granted strength so suddenly he hardly knows what to do with it. Of course, this strength is not all it seems. He isn’t foolish enough to think that it was given for free. A woman’s voice haunts him, in the back of his mind. It doesn’t speak words, but it reaches for his heart, with dark fingers. It tempts him towards something terrible, and with time, Vol can feel himself slowly slipping towards it.
Great power ought to have been the gift of a hero. But heroes ought not have control of corpses like this. Vol is quick to kill, and even murder, but even he draws the line at interfering with the dead. The first time he used his power, and he saw corpses pulled together, and their limbs twisted, and their flesh fused, he felt sick. When he heard monstrous screams and he saw that fleshy mass begin to move, he felt terrified.
He falls deeper into the sea of darkness, pulled by a force that he hardly knows. The stronger he gets, the more of his soul he loses. Some part of him holds back against going any further, against becoming even more of a monster. That is, until, one day, he catches a flash of silver amongst that sea, shining like a star. The silver infatuates him, just as it infatuates the many men that serve him. The rarest of all gems, he thinks. He couldn’t bring himself to think of it as human. He hordes it for himself, and in that dark sea of monstrosity that he swims in, he finds himself with a singular source of light, and he dares to go even deeper still, enough to upset the entirety of the continent.
Join Vol as he wreaks havoc in the Yarmdon lands, warring for everything that he does not yet have.
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It's a good novel but the problem is that it has romance tag and that dosent go well with villain tag romance always ruins the story so I would ask if you could remove it so it gets more attention
The story of Vol, brother of Jok. Set within the Time of Tiger's universe, it follows the brutal uprising of Vol. His story is a contrasting one to Oliver's. Whereas Oliver is a Dark Hero, Vol is a villain of circumstance. He does not hesitate to murder, even the innocent, as is the Yarmdon way. He feels no loyalty to his people, or their ways. He seizes the blessing of the System, and uses it to augment the strength that he already has, as he walks a bloodstained path towards vengeance.
I couldn’t read pass chapter 2 as this novel is difficult to digest what’s going on. This seems or like a continuation for another book rather than having a simple introduction to the story.
Haven't read the novel but I definitely will, also gifting a cola because the author never received a gift here😓
I can't find the words to describe this work, calling it "beautiful" would only lower the value that this piece has. The first strong component that this novel has is the hype that every end of every chapter gives you, next we have a well written system that is probably the best that I've ever seen so far. I'm saying that because it's really easy to understand and there are no stats errors (What i mean is that someone gives like 50 strength to a character and then in the overall strength they give them 10 plus or less). Another strong point is the MC itself, because it's not like the 99% of the other works that make him so intelligent that he understands everything and he is perfect in acting, he is actually developing with the stats that the system gives him and he isn't "perfect" at all. The conversations in this work are really good and the writing quality didn't fall in the same cringe conversations and aren't repetitive. The other characters in this story are well written and they aren't brain-dead people (Even within the ones that are against the MC). I really like how it is developing the story and how the side characters have important value in the story and not focusing only on the MC. I really want to continue this review commenting on other things but i think that it would be too much. The only thing that I request from the author is please, don't destroy this work rushing it and don't stop
I love the dedication that you put into your work this is truly a masterpiece with a lot of potential. I wish you the best author I hope that more people find this and enjoy as I have
As an author of fantasy/war genre, I assure you that you are writing a masterpiece. Keep up the great work
The story started out well. The MC was getting things done. Even though it’s a system Nov, he had to work for almost everything to level-up. The development became exciting at 100+ chaps. However, if you’re a villain mc reader, I can confirm he ain’t one. He is an anti-hero at best. The MC also questions his morals on almost every raid he does despite, having a goal of gaining power. His edge lord barometer shot up once a FC was introduced. The MC does treasure her to the point of sacrificing his safety to save her. I was enjoy the read until that point. On the other hand, if you overlook my cons, it should be a decent read
This is an incredible piece, the world, grammar and characters are top tier, peak even, every conversation flows like silk you can quite literally feel the most intense of moments as if you're there, it's just wonderful.