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Synopsis
Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment.
That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic.
However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family.
Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafia group?
Credits to Mr Editor for such an amazing job.
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Write a reviewOk lets start the review. Concept is interesting especially since it's about mafia and very few people do this idea. Writing style is good feels stiff sometimes but its ok. Huge potential and why do I seem like the author is describing death from personal experience in this novel
Yo, this story is off the hook! The author nailed it with the whole reincarnation twist (the baby!!) and mafia vibes in a fantasy world ( I am waiting in next chapters!) . Big ups for this dope novel, fam! 5 stars just from reading the first chapter I can't wait to read more !!
Alright, I'm starting to love this chapter and wonder what would happen next despite some grammar issues.
After reading the first chapter, the introduction of the mc felt unique and it's my first time reading a mafia system. I hope the author releases more chapters.
The book's new, but it's already got a lot of potential, and the unique first chapter really caught my attention. Keep going author, we need more.
Overall, this story has some potential. If you can work on perfecting the pace of the story, then this one would be pretty good. Keep up the good work. Continue sharpening the structure of the story, and your path will be set. I also implore you to work on your world building to add more life to the story.
Really go start is is a bunch of exposition and gets the death of the mc out of the way. I like how unique it is with the mafia system and the occasional comedy i would def recommend.
Gender swap and mafia system with fantasy worldbuilding? Count me in! Why is this so underrated? Author, if you kept a Yt channel explaining every 5 chapters or so, I would listen to it like a dimwit(lol) because it is really like watching a serial, I'm waiting for the next installment, you did the right thing by asking someone to edit, but I feel like it was a bit too early(IMO). Anyways, good luck and kudos to you :)
Author Zero_Lives
Already loving the book. Author should keep on writing.