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Evan Shepard finds himself inexplicably transported from his world into this new reality. With only three mysterious crystals and his knowledge of the MCU, Evan navigates the complexities of a universe where both mutants and superheroes coexist.
As he strives to understand his new reality, Evan hatches a daring plan that starts with him obtaining Extremis, and ends with him standing at the top of the universal food chain.
Amidst the unfolding adventure, Evan's past and origins come to light, revealing secrets that could alter the course of his journey. As he grapples with his identity, he must also navigate the intricate dynamics of this new world, where mutants and humans struggle for coexistence.
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Write a review"I managed to read up to Chapter 10 but lost interest there. It wasn't because of the chapter itself, but rather because I couldn't develop enough interest in the main character. He's supposed to be an intriguing and mysterious guy, but in this story, he comes across as a completely random character with random goals, morality, powers, and backstory. We know nothing about him or his ambitions, and because every aspect of this character is a blank page, it was hard to find him intriguing; instead, I found him boring. The story itself isn't bad; this author usually maintains a high level of writing quality overall. I'm just not a fan of this particular story."
A novel full of metaphors, which unnecessarily complicate reading. You use this technique so much that the reading becomes heavy and generally hinders what you want to achieve, which in my opinion is that this novel is "interesting / attractive and has support from other readers". - The writing quality is excellent, with some almost imperceptible and minimal errors in semicolons. - A main character who tends to give the impression of someone chivalrous, educated and with the bearing of a noble, and I find him great but he's boring... More than 20 chapters have passed and nothing interesting has happened regarding him ( Not counting the first five chapters) , and so far no explanation of his motivations and what he wishes to achieve has been given. I think you have forgotten something important, you are in a universe full of action/events and you are writing what in my opinion is more of a romantic novel, since more than 10 chapters have been dedicated to his relationship with Ororo (She is great as Female Lead) but it's uninteresting, the dialogues are huge and he tends to ramble so much in his conversations that it becomes tedious. -The interactions with Tony and Shield were extremely interesting, it would be great to see their future interactions again. -I think there is an excess of dialogues and descriptions, that you have not been able to moderate, you have a tendency in each chapter to use this technique that you have not been able to balance properly, making reading tiring for the reader. -The upload speed seems constant and it's great that you're able to keep it that way. PS: In general, the novel is very good, I would recommend it to pass the time. [img=recommend] PDD: Keep in mind that the first 5 chapters were extremely attractive, but the speech and / or dialogues went on too long without anything significant or important happening in several later chapters.
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This ff is probably one of the best marvel ff out there probably and considering who the author is, this level of writing is expected. Though I have a few problems. You don't have to portray mc as mysterious, amused, nonchalant, casual all the chapters. It really takes the mysteriousness and allure of a character if you continue to say the same thing through 30 chapters , rather than showing the mysteriousness through his action . It makes the character emo . Second problem , I would say which isn't a major problem yet but could be, is that our mc hardly struggles . It always seems his plan is flawless which is rare in a world like marvel . Something or someone always interferes as in the technological advanced world where there are eyes everywhere . Now , would I recommend this ff out there to anyone ? Well , if you're interested in an op , mysterious and always perfect mc who doesn't seem to struggle , this ff is for you .
It is a good story, my only gripe with it is the author being verbose to an unnecessary degree which makes reading the story a drag to read through some times.
A novel full of metaphors, which unnecessarily complicate reading. You use this technique so much that the reading becomes heavy and generally hinders what you want to achieve, which in my opinion is that this novel is "interesting / attractive and has support from other readers".
Greatauthor please explain the greed crystal effects and dead mutant girl's ability in greater detail
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A great story so far I am giving you five stars so that you continue the story. the setting in characters are fantastic. The story so far is interesting and the action is pretty well written. Take my power stones for a while.
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Only one chapter and I’m already invested in the story! This look very promising and is super interesting so far.
I give this a 10/10. Dialogues are superb and I don't lose any of my brain cells. Keep up the good work author
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Author Wicked132
I’ m here first 👊🏿 to support the fam. Lets also add mutants and inhumans to the mix cause Mcu doesn’t really have so much content