One Piece: Transmigrated as Rob Lucci

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Kaydo_XD

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RandomBadass

Would like the story alot more if this was actually about Lucci and his Devil fruit. I don't like the super Vampire Devil fruit he got instead.

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Ronin_1010

You better not make him a snitch like shanks 😤😤

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EvilBlueCrystal

Gets fruit from God, first thing he does is explain and reveal it to everyone. His fruit ability is very op that can extract others fruits, why would he think noone would backstab him. Reincarnates but already has rivals and teammates the first day. Paragraphs too big, there's monologue multiplied by ten. Dialogue is very casual, they talk like children playing Minecraft pretending to be a polite and honest individuals. Mc explain his plans openly all the time, and gives friendly tips. Battles are too early, he's gathering fruits like it's nothing. His crew is only there to help him get more fruits.

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Meowyumm

I'm loving the story, no doubt about it! But I will talk about the dialogue. Dialogue is like the heart of any story, pumping life into the characters. Your story does have some terrific moments (chapter 5 my favorite chapter so far :)), but here's the thing sometimes the talk feels a tad bit forced to me. It's a common hiccup in storytelling, nothing to sweat over, I did it a couple of times as well but it's worth talking about. But hey! I love it tho keep up the good work!

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Huevo_Izquierdo

At the moment fine but the idea of the harem in One Piece seems horrible to me and the crew what will Lucci get most are women so that at the moment is a red flag for me [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Silentfairy

Its a fun read and if i have to complain about something then the story seems a bit rushed i mean understand that you want to dive in the plot but just pay a bit more attention to the other characters world and side interactions [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Scar_Justice

I'm having fun reading it so far and consistent updates.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Overlord_Beiv

honestly it is a pretty good story, it has a good start with what i belive the first fan fiction that uses this characters as the start of the journey and the protagonist and companions, and not only that but you above that and are making a good point to make the character be like their counterparts but with a different spin, this time instead of the villians of turn they feel like the good guys with gheir interactions between each others, and i think it has a lot of potential for the future, i would like to see more interactions between them and the world around them now that they arent tools for the marine and whatever may come i feel anticipation for the future of the fanfic, it has truly capture my attention at the moment, i also am reading the translation one piece fanfic i know the plot dark fruit blabla and all the good thinks there this story has them at the moment with and even better grammar, so anyone reading that should come to this one as well

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Negan_5785

This is the story of a reincarnated Lucci who is extremely a fan of the main characters. You can already see how it will be... Helping to save Ace without receiving anything in return, helping the Straw Hats enter Impel Down when he could do it alone for no reason... The worst thing is that every stupid action he tries to justify with some "scheming" plan that is incredibly stupid. As if that were not enough, he has an incredible plot armor (find Shiki in just a couple of days), and although he can steal fruits, he only steals from secondary characters, losing many opportunities to obtain good devil fruits. Other than the above, the story is pretty fun, and the writing style is enjoyable, so if the author would stop being a fanboy it could be pretty good.

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Khmira_Fares

very nice. ............................

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WTV_IDC

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Sterky67

exelente fan-fic la historia es muy buena el mc está bien representado, influenciado por rob Luci pero le falta las interacciones de el mc y su tripulación espero que mejore en el futuro pero en general muy buena

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Ullu_93

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Khmira_Fares

very . ................................... good

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NEDER_GOD

Very good story What if you add scientist and add new devil fruit🍑 FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS FAST UPDATE LODS

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sebas_tian_3956

i like this story so far and i neeeeed more filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler

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Gratiz_

Writing quality - 5/5, there are some typos, but who cares. Updating stability - 5/5, I still want 5x chapter tho... I should rate it 3/5 at best. Story development - 4/5, I should rate it 3/5 at best. Character design -4/5, wish fullfilment, so character reactions are not genuine. The beginning is the worst. I actually want to rate this ff 2/5 because of how stupid the mc was in the beginning. He is stil dumb, but at least his iq is normal now for some reason. World background 4/5, I want more depth.