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"Tried Calling You" is a short story about the special bond between a man and his cat. The story follows the cat, Barrel, as he navigates the challenges of loss and abandonment. Through Barrel's journey, the story explores the themes of resilience, hope, and the power of love.
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Good story but I think you can improve on your world background and story development it felt like you're leaving dots for us to connect .I really enjoyed reading it. It was awesome.There's a quote "A story describes a writer's existence" (my quote)I can see your reflection on it .
Both storyline and character development are excellent. It was easy to read and I liked the way you used poem to describe incidents and characters. It's probably one of the most realistic story I've ever seen or read.
the grammar was used in spectacular way really impressed with the story but sadly it has been ended
I can say the novel is well written, the components which author is trying to show are amazing. The characters were portrayed very well. I am not a poetic person but still can relate to the poetic writing of the author. the emotion which were used are very vibrant and i must say author tried his best to portray the necessary emotion which make this work complete and realistic to the point where every person can feel the emotional outburst.Kudos to you
I like how you introduced each characters with poems and more but you should add some character background and story development cause it look like to me you must connect some dots but overall i like the story and i hope i can expect more of it.
Ending got me 😭It was so good. The way you used that poem to introduce each characters, I loved it. I will be waiting for new and new stories from you.
Really amazing story. It's really hard to believe only 3 characters made this short story so good. Really simple yet complex and detailed. It was easy to understand the story as a reader. The way the poem summarized the whole story and characters is actually really great writing. The foreshadowing through the poem, metaphorical usage, great character development, emotional attachment and twist of fate made this even better. The story telling was amazing too. Felt like I am seeing what is happening with my own eyes. The world background of the story was good too. Overall a great experience. 5/5 for me as a reader.