Honestly, I could barely read this. The story is SUPER fast paced. Also, you really should try and put more words per chapter instead of only like 2-3 small paragraphs. I understand you are writing this for fun probably but believe me when I say this. Many people will drop this novel is it isn't fixed.....
Honestly, I could barely read this. The story is SUPER fast paced. Also, you really should try and put more words per chapter instead of only like 2-3 small paragraphs. I understand you are writing this for fun probably but believe me when I say this. Many people will drop this novel is it isn't fixed.....
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