Alexandros Peverell-Slytherin

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FanFictionForge

Have a good day, everyone. I love myself, so 5 stars.)))))0000))))))000)))))00))))))))))))0000)))))))))))))))))))))))))))00)))))))))))))))))))

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Lerynia

it were kinda interesting 11 chapter so far. this book is definitely not written in english but was translated by machine (Chat gpt or what not) from the authors native language into english, therefore it reads hollow and mechanical, with alot of errors

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TheGeekWhoLived

Writing quality could be improved. It's cringey at times.

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jacko

it definetly have the potential to be great but its unfortunetly obvious that its translated in chatgpt or something and that the translator just copypasted it without reading it because some words just make no sense and its really breaking the flow of anotherwise good story.

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kira125566

I love it.......................................................................................................................................

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ProfaneImmortal

Bruh !! I just added it to library last night and now it's already on hiatus... That sure was quick

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DaoistVtSn8O

Intresting ...............................................................................................................................................

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Darkling_Dark

perfect..........................................

nicely.

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anonymous_226

if this is translation the pls can u mention original name ? plssssss

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AlastorGF

Buena historia me gusto la calificación es baja por que son pocos capítulos nomas XD

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Zidane_Oliveira_

Muito bom uma história bem desenvolvida com drama, romance e ação. Parabéns pelo ótimo trabalho e que venha muitos capítulos pela frente.))))))))))))))))))//////////////////))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))//////////////////((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\((((((((((((((((((((((((((\\\\\\\\\\\\\\[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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QuandaleGoofyDingl

Hadrian Potter-Malfoy-Peverell-Slytherin-Ravenclaw-Hufflepuff-Gryffindor-Emrys-Black-Zabini-Weasley-Wulfric-Dumbledore the fourth

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Daniela_Medan

I really love the idea in the storyline and we're interested in got the idea from stuff we didn't know from original and do something new about that and it's really good story and I'm all in the start please continue[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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honesh_reddy

This theory of pureblood power is false. Voldemort and Dubmedoore are half bloods who are more powerful than purebloods. Merlin and Morgana parents were muggles, yet they were far more powerful than purebloods. The more purebloods intermary each other the more inbred they becomes. We all know what happens when too much inbreeding occurs. Take a look at gaunts for example excessive inbreeding lead to loss of magic and eventually squids. Take a look at the blacks, their metamorphosis ability was lost due to inbreeding but as soon as Andromeda married a muggleborn , their daughter had metamorphosis ability. Author please do a little research.

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Aziraphale

Відмінно! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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Aprentice

thanks for a great hp ff. keep up the great work

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NikoliaBraslava

good book and characters, unfortunately it was written in russian then translated pretty badly into English. also whoever did the translation didn't read it cause there's many words that didn't tranlslatebut just got changed from Cyrillic to English characters like cogtevran which should say Ravenclaw

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ChaoticPlayer

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