Into the Infinite! with a system starting from an anime world!

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ParadoxMind

Hm. The ideas behind this seems to be decent, but the writing style is a mess. Too much complicated, over top stuff, obsessively overdescribed wording. This is a scipt at best and a bad story at worst. You know, If I could, I would like to help make this story decent, but its very hard to say the stuff I want in such a unpersonal way. I tried to write helpful, constructive criticism before, but it Just doesn't convey my intensions properly. This is currently only 2 chapters. The only thing that can make this better is a rewrite. Nothing here seems to be thought out, just sum' random thoughts smacked on a Keyboard. I don't even know why I have the need to review this in the first place, but whatever.. Cheers I guess. (Nothing personal, rly. Seriously)

LV 13

_Monarch

5 stars since i contributed in this story by giving ideas and also cuz you are writing it...will update this review after a few chapters maybe.

LV 14

AllFather_

The story quite boring and background character story quite basic to overpowered if other god in danmachi quite smart they can easily know all Buddha familia is from another world after all they came from nowhere it will more fun and interesting if buddha in that story insert background story like he is mortal from ancient time who ascending becoming a god long before god descent on mortal world so he not bound to heavenly rule because he is ex mortal that will be more interesting story or that multiverse power entity can just alter reality for example he can just use some king or famous people in danmachi world to become background story for mc to use so god not be suspicious about mc when mc engraved flana.

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Daoist3PgKGI

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LV 4

DevilDarkness

fk everything, leave it all behind, and read this story.

LV 2

Dewa_Chandrawijaya

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LV 4

Hocolate

I'm even sure that this author can't play a game, be it offline (BaldurGate 3 bannerlord, harvest moon etc.) or online (ESO, BDO etc.). Why ? because he wrote a story script where MC OP (an idiot brain with an IQ of 10) with his stupid system. He doesn't understand what expectations and reality are (with summoning Budha, Scathach, Ruhas, Killua? lol) I'm even sure that in the reality of an author like you, if you play and create a team in Dota 2, maybe in the initial preliminary round of The International you will have 300 dead on your hero hahahahahahahahahhahahaahhahaha

LV 11

Daoist_Leii

IT SOO GOOD THAT'S THE ONLY THING I WILL SAY SUCH A SHAME THOUGH A RAN OUT OF CHAPS TO READ ;( KEEP IT UP AUTHOR

LV 4

Supernova_Uchiha

Ha ha, I got the first review. Very good.