In Fallout with a Chat Group

LV 1

Daoistz861E7

Finished reading at time of writing. (6 chapters total.) B- quality. Typos a plenty, mostly needs a quick proof-read to fix. The author does sadly have the habit of copying conversation dialogue (and dialogue flow) one-to-one with canon. Should mix it up a bit to be fresher, considering this is happening years before canon. Even saw the same two jokes from Fallout 3 used back to back, despite being set in the Mojave, delivered by a different character... Oh, and the "chatroom" is kinda pointless? Everyone is in a different universe, and only MC realizes that she is in a fictional universe. Doesn't realize the others are as well. No-one in the chat knows about any of the other's universes. (Could've been pretty interesting "helping" these otherwise canon characters grow with some spoilers about their universe.) ...Anyway, it means MC can't help them, and they can't help her, making it all seem pretty pointless... Still, B- quality. Lore is mostly on-point or needs some small tweaks. (Like having the Goodsprings bar radio broken years before canon, despite it breaking hours before New Vegas begins.) Fallout fics are rare, and good Fallout fics even more so. B- is a glowing recommendation.

LV 13

HarkenEliwood

Already liking it. Only MC seems to be a reincarnated but it's ok.

LV 4

Pekora_Simp

Giving it a 5 for now and would likely lower it when this gets worst or not

LV 14

stinkclaw

I read the title.... SAY LESS! tecydcuudc