A Fantastic Journey

LV 4

amaturewriter

why give a god power and neuter it? the entire reason these powers are OP is cause they just are. i mean arc of embodiment [ AOE ] was OP, only the user was a dumbass, intentionally done by author.....neutering em is stupid...just give a weak ass power with the power to evolve. AOE is only useful when its OP [i mean its neutered abilities can more or less be achieved by the magic in DXD world] Also what fairness....u just wished for the greatest talent .....dude pretty much super class in a couple yrs....stupid for u to needlessly neuter MC when u gave him some OP ****

LV 13

Gxrdin_Fps

MC is pretty stupid, what kind of person asks for disadvantages in the wishes, and it wasn’t just one, the MC wished for a lot of disadvantages.......

LV 4

ShadowsFall

Too much bull****. If you dont want a op Mc why give him op abillites then nerf the **** out of them. At the very least just give him a devolved version of the ability, not all these disadvantages. Hell you could even just give him some less op abillites that he needs to figure out and evolve though out the story like the satan flames from Blue Exorcist or something else I dont know, ****. Im just disappointed.

LV 2

Aizen_Chair_Sama

This had the potential to be amazing, but the choices the author made ruined it. I actually like the nerf because being to op leads to many problems in the future. That was until he summoned the servants and told his family about it. He could have acted as he found them later in the human world and made them to his servants... I'll change the review when he either changes those chapters or he improves the in later chapters.

LV 3

Qvoth

Nerfed mc Nerfed mc.............................................................trash MC gay.........................................................................

LV 3

QTi

Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration

LV 4

AmiOnigase

Honestly I despise Author that always keep changing and rewrite their stories.. Make up your mind Author, this story is about Phoenix OR Dragon Bloodline MC.. Why you keep rewrite man... Stick to your original plan of plot, not succumb to demand of reviews... Who Author of this story??? You or them???

LV 5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

The formatting leaves much to be dewired on the legibility front. Smaller paragraphss instead of walls would help for starters. In addition as can be predicted when the author wishes for a Primordial Dark Pheonix bloodline, the story just gets worse from there. Add a starter pack that buries him in all he desires, extremely op fate stay night summons starting when hes still a little kid. A name that is the only one in his family that doesnt start with an R and is spanish for devil instead. I could go on and on but really, if the wishes dont give away just what you're in for then the next chapter will and child hood saga will.

LV 4

Bainas

I liked it better with the first version but you have killed your story now. Your writing quality is is not bad 3 star Stability now with only 1 chapter and nothing new released a 1 Star Development with so little gives only 1 Star A pity that you have not writen a new story but have changed to much so the character is only 1 Star DXD is a established World so for this 3 Star

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

Seriously, it started well, but it began to improve as you read men, if you are going to write a story, never leave everything at once ruin the story.

LV 5

goldzi

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LV 5

Daoist721221

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LV 4

Daoist21616161

This author surpassed himself to cause his classification to suck with just one chapter ... he's a fucking genius.

LV 3

HaruTheGreat

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LV 5

JIektor

Good!!!-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 2

Ali_Makles

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LV 5

Ajden

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