/ Fantasy / A Hunter's Legacy
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From riches to rags. From prince to slave. From family to execution. Ever since The Fall the kingdom has become warped and twisted. The beasts are no longer on our side- instead? We hunt them.
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The nation of Giliad was once a prosperous nation that held its borders thanks to the chosen who bonded with the beasts. The lucky and talented whose bond would allow them a fraction of their beast's powers. This mutualistic relationship granted the beasts protection and homes while granting the people the power to secure their borders, create new technologies, and enhance day-to-day life. It all changed with The Fall. The king got greedy after seeing a neighboring kingdom use ‘the ritual’ to infuse a beast’s life force into a weapon allowing them to siphon a majority of their powers. Now the royal family is slain, the nation is in disarray, the youngest prince is nowhere to be found, and only a fraction of beasts remain.
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The background on the world seems intriguing and well placed, the characters need a bit of fleshing out- but I like the direction so far very interesting so far.
Alright, first things first to make your novel more appealing to readers: work on the structure of your writing. Apologies in advance, but your writing appears a bit messy and lacks proper organization. There's no clear distinction between one dialogue and the next, and this affects the overall quality of your novel. Despite that, your story has an interesting plot, and the conflicts are well-written. However, I believe the challenging part for this novel to attract readers lies in its writing style. Still, it's intriguing so far, even though it might take a few chapters to fully engage readers 😂.